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What about your personal fashion style?

I think my personal fashion style is cool. I have got a lot of nice T-shirts and jeans, many of them are very special, for instance a T-shirt from the Police. I have also very cool and comfortable shoes as good sport clothes for riding my bike, hiking and jogging. I think it is not nesessery to have the most expensive fashion, the price and the quality are the key for my style.

Danke

Hallo,

What about your personal fashion style?

I think my personal fashion style is cool. I have got a lot of
nice T-shirts and jeans. Many of them are very special, for
instance a T-shirt from the Police.

a police T-shirt? a T-shirt with a police logo? a The Police T-shirt (Band)?
I also have very cool and comfortable shoes as well as good sport clothes
etwas gebräuchlicher scheint mir sports clothes
for riding my bike, hiking and jogging (meine brit. Freunde sagen immer running, nicht jogging). I think it is not nesessery
immer noch seit deiner letzten Anfrage: necessary
to buy the most expensive fashion. Dazu hat dir sin beim letzten Mal statt fashion „trendy clothes“ vorgeschlagen
The price (affordability?) and the quality of clothes/a piece are the key for my style.
Irgendwie widerspricht dein Schlusssatz dem Anfang. Wenn es dir NUR um Preis und Qualität geht, wie soll da ein „cool style“ rauskommen? DU beschreibst doch eher praktische Kleidung.
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