Die Email ist keine Bewerbung.Bei der Firma, bei der ich mich bewerbe werden keine direkten Praktikumsplätze angeboten.Aber ich wollte trotzdem anfragen.Es wäre gut, wenn ihr das Korrekturlesen könntet!!! Danke schonmal im vorraus. Auch über Kritik beim Inhalt würde ich mich freuen:
Dear Sir or Madam of Toyota Motorsport,
I am looking forward to seeing Toyota back at Le Mans.
Le Mans means to me: one winner (who will certainly be TOYOTA), one track, one day, two hearts (Racing and Efficiency) and lots of experiences.
Therefore, I am very interested in a work placement for school pupils at TMG
to gain lots of experiences.
In case you do not contemplate offering a work placement, my school certificate and my participation in extraordinary projects such as a computer-controlled model railway, the third-place success in the Mathematic-Olympics or the youth engineering program of Intel and the Leibniz University may convince you to make an exception.
If you need further information, I would like to send you an application.
Thank you for your time and consideration and I am looking forward to a positive response of the enterprise, in which nothing is impossible.
Yours faithfully,
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