Englisch Gramatik, nur kurz überfliegen ob das ok

Von: , 17.12.2010 16:54 Uhr

Hi,
ich wollte mal fragen, ob mir jemand mal hier drüber schauen kann udn sagen kann, ob ich den text so meiner lehrerin abegeben kann oder eher nicht.
danke im vorraus :)
No. 6.) Text
“Give a Boy a Gun” is a interesting title. Its sounds exciting
The story is consist of exciting main characters and some parts
consist of difficult
Slang. Gary and his friends chat sometimes (“..TerminX; Ever C a dead
person? Blkchokr: In
A casket?..”,pages 86), (“..Rebooto: U guys need 2 make a smart bomb.
Dayzd:
Smart bomb 4 dumb jocks.”, pages 98).



No. 7.) Education Aspects
The novel “Give a Boy a Gun” is addres for young adults in age of 14.
It would be wise to read the book in the school. Its thematized
important topics and
perhaps their are in a reading mood. And teachers can use the book to
make a
lesson to talk about mobbing or school rampage. After that the
teacher and the class can
agitate about solving problems.

Main topic
The main topic in the book is mobbing.
Through tease a person accrues hate and desire to take revenge.
The jocks tease the outsiders all the time and nobody say anything.
Teachers look away and don’t try to help.
Kids can get wrong role model. Gary’s and Brendan’s rolde models are
the
Two pupils, who started the rampage in Littleton.


No. 8.) Additional Comments
Relationship between people

Many young adults are able to identify with Brendan and Gary.
Brendan has a worse relationship to his parents. They annoy Brendan,
but they only trying
to help Brendan. Garys relationship to his father is not available.
After the divorce his father
does not contact him.
Gary and Brendan have a real friendship. They always help each other
and it seems that the two of them only come as package. And the
relation in the Middleton High Schoole are the same like in real
life. So there are the popular football players and the outsiders.
The cool pupils and the uncool pupils.

Authors message
(.. “to ending youth violence. To every young person who has ever
been killed
or wounded by a gun..” pages 5).
Parents should take care of their children, teachers sould help
pupils!
Is there violence? Is someboday sad or depressive? How can I help?
No one should look away!


No. 9.) Personal Statement/comment

In my opinion is the book “Give a Boy a Gun” one of the best novel
I’d ever read.
I liked as well the different and special characters of the story. It
was easy for me to put the names to the different figures together.
And I remembered them quickly, also in the beginning. It is easy to
read and specific written for teenager.
The book is about very important themes and as far as I can see,
speak the society to less
about such themes. The point in the book is the growing brutality and
criminality, misbehavior from the teachers, mobbing and despair from
outsiders.
Its importent to think about the motives of Gary and Brendan. Nobody
should look away,
when he see that someone is tease by an other person. Teachers should
to step in a fight.
Maybe they should take a look at the outsiders and try to help them
and pay attention.
This book made me turn pages for hours. And honestly I have to say
that I had to cry
in the because the helplessness and despair of Gary and Brendan made
me sad.

3 Antworten zu dieser Frage

  1. Antwort von nach 7 Minuten 1 hilfreich
    Re: Englisch Gramatik, nur kurz überfliegen ob das ok

    Hi,
    die Grammatik holpert noch an so manchen Stellen! Schaue Dir z.B. noch mal die Verben, den Gebrauch der Zeiten etc an.
    Gruß Bubs
    ________________________________________

    ei S:ich wollte mal fragen, ob mir jemand mal hier drüber schauen kann udn sagen kann, ob ich den text so meiner lehrerin
    abegeben kann oder eher nicht.
    danke im vorraus :)
    No. 6.) Text
    “Give a Boy a Gun” is a interesting title. Its sounds exciting
    The story is consist of exciting main characters and some
    parts
    consist of difficult
    Slang. Gary and his friends chat sometimes (“..TerminX; Ever C
    a dead
    person? Blkchokr: In
    A casket?..”,pages 86), (“..Rebooto: U guys need 2 make a
    smart bomb.
    Dayzd:
    Smart bomb 4 dumb jocks.”, pages 98).



    No. 7.) Education Aspects
    The novel “Give a Boy a Gun” is addres for young adults in age
    of 14.
    It would be wise to read the book in the school. Its
    thematized
    important topics and
    perhaps their are in a reading mood. And teachers can use the
    book to
    make a
    lesson to talk about mobbing or school rampage. After that the
    teacher and the class can
    agitate about solving problems.

    Main topic
    The main topic in the book is mobbing.
    Through tease a person accrues hate and desire to take
    revenge.
    The jocks tease the outsiders all the time and nobody say
    anything.
    Teachers look away and don’t try to help.
    Kids can get wrong role model. Gary’s and Brendan’s rolde
    models are
    the
    Two pupils, who started the rampage in Littleton.


    No. 8.) Additional Comments
    Relationship between people

    Many young adults are able to identify with Brendan and Gary.
    Brendan has a worse relationship to his parents. They annoy
    Brendan,
    but they only trying
    to help Brendan. Garys relationship to his father is not
    available.
    After the divorce his father
    does not contact him.
    Gary and Brendan have a real friendship. They always help each
    other
    and it seems that the two of them only come as package. And
    the
    relation in the Middleton High Schoole are the same like in
    real
    life. So there are the popular football players and the
    outsiders.
    The cool pupils and the uncool pupils.

    Authors message
    (.. “to ending youth violence. To every young person who has
    ever
    been killed
    or wounded by a gun..” pages 5).
    Parents should take care of their children, teachers sould
    help
    pupils!
    Is there violence? Is someboday sad or depressive? How can I
    help?
    No one should look away!


    No. 9.) Personal Statement/comment

    In my opinion is the book “Give a Boy a Gun” one of the best
    novel
    I’d ever read.
    I liked as well the different and special characters of the
    story. It
    was easy for me to put the names to the different figures
    together.
    And I remembered them quickly, also in the beginning. It is
    easy to
    read and specific written for teenager.
    The book is about very important themes and as far as I can
    see,
    speak the society to less
    about such themes. The point in the book is the growing
    brutality and
    criminality, misbehavior from the teachers, mobbing and
    despair from
    outsiders.
    Its importent to think about the motives of Gary and Brendan.
    Nobody
    should look away,
    when he see that someone is tease by an other person. Teachers
    should
    to step in a fight.
    Maybe they should take a look at the outsiders and try to help
    them
    and pay attention.
    This book made me turn pages for hours. And honestly I have to
    say
    that I had to cry
    in the because the helplessness and despair of Gary and
    Brendan made
    me sad.

  2. Antwort von nach 2 Tagen 1 hilfreich
    Re: Englisch Gramatik, nur kurz überfliegen ob das ok

    hi, seltsame Texte ... prima Wortschatz, geübte Formulierungen - und dann komische Denglisch-Brocken und sowas von offensichtliche Fehler. Scheint eher ein Ich-teste-meinen-Pauker-Text zu sein. Mit mal drüber schauen ist es jedenfalls nicht getan. Was die Lehrerin sagt, hängt von Klasse und Niveau ab.
    LG
    Burghart

  3. Antwort von nach 70 Tagen 1 hilfreich
    Re: Englisch Gramatik, nur kurz überfliegen ob das ok

    Hallo, warum ich angefragt werde, ist mir ein Rätsel: ich habe von englischer Sprache etc. keine Ahnung.
    Gruß, Katharina

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