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My Name is David and I am 16 years old. I come from Freiburg and I would like to tell you something about the Indo-Europeans. My main points are general information’s about the Indo-Europeans and the difficult between the Indo-Europeans. The Indo-Europeans are a nations family. By a nations family one understands several nations that in their language, culture and mythology come from an original nation. To the Indo-European nations family belong the Germans, the Romans, the Celts, the Greeks, the Slavs, the Anatolians, the Iranians, the Indoiranians and some others. The term Aryan is a synonym for Indo-Europeans. But it was not used after the Second World War any more. There are also other nations families like the Altaics or Hamito-Semitic. The first Indo-Europeans were herdsmen. They only lived off stock farming. The Indo-Europeans were very underdeveloped that time. Their areas spread as they started with the agriculture after a short time. So they could settle a lot of areas in the young history of the human race. One can reconstruct the Indo-Europeans history by the language. Today one supposes the Indo-Europeans origin is above the Caspian Sea. The general theory says that approximately 4000 B.C. the Indo-Europeans walked from their homeland to Europe, Iran and India. The basis of the advanced civilization of the Indo-Europeans is descended from the Iranians and Indoiranians. Our numbers, the idea of the monotheism, the rights of women, and the base of war leading have their origin by the Indoiranians and the Iranians. Today the Indo-Europeans with about 2,5 billion humans represent 40% of the world population. They belong to one of the most successful nations families of the earth. However, there are also differences between the Indo-Europeans. One divides them in 4 groups. The North-Indo-Europeans, the South-Indo-Europeans, the West-Indo-Europeans and the High-Indo-Europeans. To the North-Indo-Europeans the Germans and the Slavs belong. They were well adapted in cold and darkness of the north. They were organized in different tribes. The most famous ones were the Vikings, Anglo-Saxons and the Goths. They had theirs own polytheism religion. And Odin was one of the most famous Gods. To the South-Indo-Europeans the Indoiranians belong. The Indoiranians or also named Indians lived in big richness. Their language the Sanskrit is one of the oldest Indo-European languages. The religion of the Buddhism also comes from Indoiran. They saw the bulls as a holy animal. But today the Indians also see the cow as a holy animal. The reason is not clear to this day. To the West-Indo-Europeans the Romans, the Celts and some others belong. The West-Indo-Europeans were well organized. Their tribes united quickly to a big horde. They were very powerfully. They also had the polytheism. And Rome is their biggest empire to this day. To the High-Indo-Europeans the Iranians and the Armenians belong. The High-Indo-Europeans were called Aryans. The most important were the Persians, the Medians (today the Kurds), the Parthians and the Skythians. After their first appearance all tribes united to a big horde. And they knew only the right of the blood. So they could destroy one empire after the other. They had only the Monotheistic religion of Ahura Mazda. There are other Indo-Europeans but one can’t divide them. They are called as isolated nations. The Greeks and Albanians belong to the biggest isolated nations. Besides, they are very related to the high-Indo-Europeans. However, there are third nation. The Anatolians. But after the attack of the Turks they were destroyed. I hope my presentation was interesting for you and I hope you have learned something about this. Goodbye and a wonderful day!