Hallo
für meine Unibewerbung brauche ich ein MOtivationsschreiben mit folgenden Punkten:
What are the characteristics needed to be a good manager/expert in your chosen field?
Why are you interested in a career in your chosen field?
Explain how you have researched your choice of study and prepared yourself for studying in the Netherlands.
Why should Stenden Hogeschool accept you as a student in your chosen management programme?
Könnt ihr mal gucken ob die Punkte alle ausreichend behandelt, bzw beantwortet wurden.
Und mal bitte das Englisch checken.
Letter of Motivation: Tourism Management
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hereby I would like to express my motivation for studying Tourism Management at Stenden Hogeschool.
After graduating from school in March 2008, I went to London, England as an Au Pair for nine months. This international experience helped me to strengthen my English skills, as I visited a language school and passed the IELTS – exam. Additionally it encouraged me to live and study abroad.
As it is my future goal to work in the multilateral and always expanding tourism industry I would like to start my international career as a German student in Holland.
The job as a tourism manager has fascinated me for a few years.
To put my expectancy into practice I am doing an internship in the local event agency XX GmbH.
I am also gaining some experience in a hotel afterwards to get a wider view of the whole industry.
As different as the Tourism industry is, the characteristics of a Tourism manager should be as well.
In my opinion a manager should not only have the typical characteristic such as authority or leadership. I rather think that they should be able to work in a team and are more than happy to help people. Besides a good understanding of the industry and what is happening around someone a Tourism manger should also be flexible and spontaneous, willing to expand their own horizons and open minded. The most important character trait is that a manager in this industry should love his job.
Due to my willingness and my interest for your study program I am sure I can accept and accomplish the challenge of studying at your university.
Thank you very much for considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kim
Danke!!!