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Hallo zusammen,

ich schriebe am Donnerstag eine Englisch-Klausur und muss mich dabei u.a. auf die unten aufgeführten Fragen vorbereiten. Kann mir bitte jemand die Anworten unten korregiren und bzw. Ergänzungen machen?

Vielen lieben Dank!

Teufelchen

  1. Why must goods be checked thoroughly after their delivery?
    Goods must be checked thoroughly after their delivery, because they can be damaged or wrong items were delivered. Moreover you must control, if there is the right quantity and quality.

  2. What is the importance of up-dating stock records?
    It’s important to keep the stock records up-to-date, so that the customers can be informed, if the company can deliver the goods immediately. Furthermore the firm should know, how many goods are on stock to order new goods, when there aren’t enough anymore. Moreover employees from every department can be informed, if there is place in the stock for new goods without controlling the stock.

  3. What is the difference between the purchasing and the sales market?
    On the purchasing market the wholesalers make enquiries to different suppliers and manufacturer to find out the favourable price. The suppliers and manufacturer submit their offers with their terms of delivery, terms of payment, the prices and possible discounts. After a comparison of all offers the wholesaler places an order with the supplier or manufacturer, who offers the best purchase price.
    On the sales market in contrast wholesalers submit offers to their customers, which are retailers and private consumers to make a profit.

  4. Name intermediaries of the wholesaler and describe their tasks.
    The intermediaries of a wholesaler are banks and forwarding agents.
    The most important one is the bank, because only with a bank by his side the flow of money can be secured. So the bank transfer the money both from the firm account of the wholesaler to the account of the supplier, if the firm must settle an invoice and to the firm account from the customers, when they pay their invoices. Furthermore the wholesaler needs a lot of money, e.g. to open a new subsidiary, to expand or to purchase a new product. So the wholesaler normally has to ask his bank for a loan. When he has enough securities, the bank will grant the loan.
    Furthermore the forwarding agent is also important, because he transports the goods both from the wholesaler to his customers, e.g. retailers and private consumers and from the supplier or manufacturer to the wholesaler.

  5. Describe your career so far and your job now.
    I left school in summer 2003 and started an apprenticeship as office communication clerk at “Deutsche Telekom”, which I finished in January 2006.
    In February 2006 I started my job at the reception of Metro Cash and Carry International, where I still work. My main tasks are to welcome and to attend to visitors from all over the world, to operate the switchboard of the whole Metro Cash and Carry International and to reserve the conference rooms. Furthermore I work in the “Office Management”, where I prepare and effect video conferences. Additionally I undertake small tasks in the administrative area, when bigger meetings are planned, there’s no secretary available in the department or the secretary is ill.

  6. Describe your working conditions.
    My regular weekly working time is 38.5 hours, excluding breaks. As the reception has to be busy from 7 to 7, I change the beginning time with my colleague, so I start 2 or 3 days a week at 7 a.m. and finish when I want and on the other days I start when I want and finish at 7 p.m.
    Overtime can only be build up, it won’t be paid.
    My annual holidays are 30 days.
    The working atmosphere is very nice. My direct colleague is very friendly and also the other girl, who is working in Office Management too but not at the reception is very kind. We are a really good team. My boss, Michaela, is also ok. Sometimes she is in a bad mood, but happily it isn’t so often. Otherwise I get along with her.

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Bitte schön.

LG
Andsastra

Hallo teuflische,
ken Thema

  1. Why must goods be checked thoroughly after their delivery?
    Goods must be checked thoroughly after their delivery, because
    they can be damaged or wrong items were delivered. Moreover
    you must control, if there is the right quantity and quality.

Goods must be checked thoroughly after their delivery because
they could be damaged or wrong items could have been delivered. Furthermore, you must control whether the goods have the correct quantity and quality.

  1. What is the importance of up-dating stock records?
    It’s important to keep the stock records up-to-date, so that
    the customers can be informed, if the company can deliver the
    goods immediately. Furthermore the firm should know, how many
    goods are on stock to order new goods, when there aren’t
    enough anymore. Moreover employees from every department can
    be informed, if there is place in the stock for new goods
    without controlling the stock.

It’s important to keep the stock records up-to-date so that
the customers can be informed if the company can deliver the
goods immediately. Furthermore, the company should know how many
goods are on stock to be able to order new goods when supplies run low. Moreover, employees from every department can
be informed whether there is place in the warehouse for new goods
without controlling the stock. (Ich habe den Satz nicht wirklich verstanden.)

  1. What is the difference between the purchasing and the sales
    market?
    On the purchasing market the wholesalers make enquiries to
    different suppliers and manufacturer to find out the
    favourable price. The suppliers and manufacturer submit their
    offers with their terms of delivery, terms of payment, the
    prices and possible discounts. After a comparison of all
    offers the wholesaler places an order with the supplier or
    manufacturer, who offers the best purchase price.
    On the sales market in contrast wholesalers submit offers to
    their customers, which are retailers and private consumers to
    make a profit.

On the purchasing market the wholesalers make enquiries to
different suppliers and manufacturers to find out the most
favourable price. The suppliers and manufacturers submit their
offers with their terms of delivery, terms of payment, the
prices and possible discounts. After a comparison of all
offers the wholesaler places an order with the supplier or
manufacturer who offers the best purchase price.
On the sales market in contrast wholesalers submit offers to
their customers, who are retailers and private consumers to
make a profit.

  1. Name intermediaries of the wholesaler and describe their
    tasks.

The intermediaries of a wholesaler are banks and forwarding
agents.
The most important one is the bank, because only with a bank
by his side the flow of money can be secured. So the bank
transfer the money both from the firm account of the
wholesaler to the account of the supplier, if the firm must
settle an invoice and to the firm account from the customers,
when they pay their invoices. Furthermore the wholesaler needs
a lot of money, e.g. to open a new subsidiary, to expand or to
purchase a new product. So the wholesaler normally has to ask
his bank for a loan. When he has enough securities, the bank
will grant the loan.
Furthermore the forwarding agent is also important, because he
transports the goods both from the wholesaler to his
customers, e.g. retailers and private consumers and from the
supplier or manufacturer to the wholesaler.

The intermediaries of a wholesaler are banks and forwarding
agents.
The most important one is the bank, because only with a bank
by his side the flow of money can be secured. So the bank
transfers the money both from the account of the
wholesaler to the account of the supplier, if the firm must
settle an invoice and from the account of the customers,
when they pay their invoices. Furthermore, the wholesaler needs
a lot of money, e.g. to open a new subsidiary, to expand or to
purchase a new product. So the wholesaler normally has to ask
his bank for a loan. When he has enough securities, the bank
will grant the loan.
Furthermore, the forwarding agent is also important, because he
transports the goods both from the wholesaler to his
customers, e.g. retailers and private consumers and from the
supplier or manufacturer to the wholesaler.

  1. Describe your career so far and your job now.
    I left school in summer 2003 and started an apprenticeship as
    office communication clerk at “Deutsche Telekom”, which I
    finished in January 2006.
    In February 2006 I started my job at the reception of Metro
    Cash and Carry International, where I still work. My main
    tasks are to welcome and to attend to visitors from all over
    the world, to operate the switchboard of the whole Metro Cash
    and Carry International and to reserve the conference rooms.
    Furthermore I work in the “Office Management”, where I prepare
    and effect video conferences. Additionally I undertake small
    tasks in the administrative area, when bigger meetings are
    planned, there’s no secretary available in the department or
    the secretary is ill.

I left school in summer 2003 and started an apprenticeship as
office communications clerk at “Deutsche Telekom”, which I
finished in January 2006.
In February 2006 I started my job at the reception of Metro
Cash and Carry International, where I am still working. My main
tasks are to welcome and to attend to international visitors, to operate the switchboard of the whole Metro Cash
and Carry International and to reserve the conference rooms.
Furthermore, I work in Office Management, where I prepare
and effect(?) video conferences. Additionally, I undertake small
tasks in the administrative area, when bigger meetings are
planned, there’s no secretary available in the department or
the secretary is ill.

  1. Describe your working conditions.
    My regular weekly working time is 38.5 hours, excluding
    breaks. As the reception has to be busy from 7 to 7, I change
    the beginning time with my colleague, so I start 2 or 3 days a
    week at 7 a.m. and finish when I want and on the other days I
    start when I want and finish at 7 p.m.
    Overtime can only be build up, it won’t be paid.
    My annual holidays are 30 days.
    The working atmosphere is very nice. My direct colleague is
    very friendly and also the other girl, who is working in
    Office Management too but not at the reception is very kind.
    We are a really good team. My boss, Michaela, is also ok.
    Sometimes she is in a bad mood, but happily it isn’t so often.
    Otherwise I get along with her.

My regular weekly working time is 38.5 hours, excluding
breaks. As the reception has to be occupied from 7 A.M.to 7 P.M., I alternate
the beginning time with my colleague, so I start 2 or 3 days a
week at 7 a.m. and finish when I want and on the other days I
start when I want and finish at 7 p.m.
Overtime can only be built up, it won’t be paid.
My annual vacation is 30 days.
The working atmosphere is very nice. My direct colleague is
very friendly and also the other girl, who is working in
Office Management, too, but not at the reception is very kind.
We are a really good team. My superior, Michaela, is also ok.
Sometimes she is in a bad mood, but happily it does not happen so often.
Otherwise I get along with her.

So jetzt, gar nicht soo schlecht, im wesentlichen solltest du auf deine Kommata achten. Ich habe auch ziemlich vorsichtig korrigiert, schließlich sollte das Ganze noch von dir sein. Allerdings gibe es eingie Sachen, die du so nicht in einer Bewerbung schreiben solltest, falls das eine ist.

Ralph

Hallo Ralph,

So jetzt, gar nicht soo schlecht, im wesentlichen solltest du
auf deine Kommata achten. Ich habe auch ziemlich vorsichtig
korrigiert, schließlich sollte das Ganze noch von dir sein.
Allerdings gibe es eingie Sachen, die du so nicht in einer
Bewerbung schreiben solltest, falls das eine ist.

nein, das ganze ist keine Bewerbung. Nur Vorbereitung auf eine Klausur…

Danke schön!

Ralph

Gruß Teufelchen

korregieren

korrigieren

Bitte schön.

LG
And s astra

*schmunzelnmuss* sorry, couldn’t resist.

lg
Kate

Käit
*munzelschmuss*

Dielen Vlank, Ktae.

GL
Artsadna

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