Englisch Geschichte
Von: , Frage gestellt am Fr, 24. Feb 2006
In Englisch hatten wir den Auftrag eine Geschichte zu schreiben! Einige Fehler konnten ich schon verbessern. Könnt ihr mir bei dem Rest helfen?
One nice day, Kevin sat in school and couldn't wait for the bell to ring.
Kevin was a racy boy with many freckles all-over the face. He was very favoured. Everyone liked him, except one guy: Bill! He just couldn’t accept that he wasn’t as popular as Kevin. But it would be better if he could, because anyway he can't change it! With his charming character and his beautiful smile, being just five minutes with Kevin was enough to know: "I like him"
When he got up it seemed like every usual morning: Having breakfast, brushing teeth, packing his schoolbag...and all this boring stuff which a 10 years old guy has to do.
"Bye mum!", he said and gave her a peck on the cheek. On the way to school he passed -like every boring morning- by one of his best friends Josh and fetched him. Josh was a bit chubby, sluggish and very, very clumsy, but that didn't care Kevin.
"Oh, come on! We're already late!" "Sure we aren't, you're just early!", Josh answered laughing. After a short discussion about being late or not, they arrived at school. Mary-Ann, who wears glasses and always has got two pigtails, was already sitting on a bench on the schoolyard. She definitely was the most intelligent of the entire class, even the entire school. Sometimes she speaked very intricately, so that the others have problems to understand her. Now the group of three is complete.
They knew each other since they were four. Nothing, precisely nothing can break them up.
The boys took a seat next to Mary-Ann. "What are we gonna do this afternoon?", Kevin asked. He looked over to his friends. "What about just....chillin'?", Josh asked.