Englisch Korrektur

Hey Leute,

ich hab hier einen Englischen Text. Könntet Ihr mal rüber schauen ob Ihr irgendwo Fehler seht müsst nicht alles korrektieren nur wenn Ihr was sehen solltet … wäre echt nett von euch

Today I would like tell you something about my favorite hobby. My favorite hobby is basketball. Of course I have other hobby´s such as talking with friend or playing football but basketball is my favorite hobby and sport. Why? That I´ll tell you later. At first I would like tell you some broad fakes about the rules and the constructions of a basketball game. The field in a basketball game is 28 meters long and 15 meters wide and on each side is a basket. The target is to throw the ball into the basket and which team has on the end of the game the most points, win the game. A game takes 4 times 10 Minutes. In team there are 5 players: the shooting guard, the point guard, the center, the power forward and the small forward. The game starts with the so called “jump-ball”. The jump-ball makes the referee. He goes to the middle of the field and throws the ball in the high and one player from each team jump and try to get the ball. Now I tell you the “point-rules” in a game. If you shoot the ball in this zone and you score a basket you will get 2 points. There also a 3-point-line and when you score a basket from this line you will get 3 points. And when you will shoot the ball and somebody fouls you, you get a free-throw. And if you score there a basket you will get 1 point. So that was the board rules and constructions of a basketball game. Now I would like tell: Why is basketball my favorite hobby? Basketball is my favorite hobby, because I love it. I love to play basketball, I love the feeling when you shoot the ball and I love the tension on the end of the game. And also I love when I do a rebound or a block. A Rebound is when somebody misses a shoot and you are the player, who jump higher as the other players and gets the ball and a block is when somebody will shot the ball and you block this shoot and prevent this shoot. But the most fun is when you have a team that are also love to play basketball and which gets everything in a game. And so I would like tell you something about my team. In my team there are also 6 players: Marvin, Arewic, Niels, Maurice, Manuel and I. I train with my team every week on Thursdays from 3 o´clock to half past 5. We have fun, when we play together and we have take part on a lot of competitions. Our last competition was for 1 week and we have won the competition. Heir you can see the medals, which we have won. In the future I will play together with Marvin in the district-League in Freital. That’s was my presentation about my favorite hobby basketball. I hope you have enjoy it and when you have any questions , you can ask me.

Bitte … wäre toll

Hallo,

hier ist eine Kurzkorrektur deines Textes. Ich bin mir sicher, dass du keine fakes, sondern facts erzählen möchtest. Viel Spaß, und viel Erfolg auch weiterhin mit deinem Hobby!

Today, I would like to tell you something about my favourite hobby. My favourite hobby is basketball. Of course, I have other hobbys as well, such as talking with friend or playing football, but basketball is my favourite hobby and sport. Why? This, I am going to tell you lateron. At first, I would like to tell you some broad facts about the rules and the construction of a basketball game. The field in a basketball game is 28 meters long and 15 meters wide and on each side there is a basket. The target is to throw the ball into the basket of the opponent and the team that has at the end of the game the most points, wins the game. A game takes 4 times 10 minutes. In the team there are 5 players: the shooting guard, the point guard, the center, the power forward and the small forward. The game starts with the so-called “jump ball”. The jump ball is thrown by the referee. He goes to the middle of the field and throws the ball to the height and one player from each team jumps and tries to get the ball. Now I tell you the “point rules” in a game. If you shoot the ball into this zone and you score a basket you will get 2 points. There is also a 3-point-line and when you score the basket from this line you will get 3 points. And when you shoot the ball and somebody fouls you, you get a free throw. If you score a basket from this you will get 1 point. So these are the board rules and the construction of a basketball game. Now I would like to tell you why basketball is my favourite hobby: Basketball is my favourite hobby, because I love it. I love to play basketball, I love the feeling when you shoot the ball and I love the tension at the end of the game. Also, I love it when I do a rebound or a block. A rebound means, when somebody misses a shoot and you are the player, who jumps higher than the other players and gets the ball - and a block is when somebody shoots the ball and you block and prevent this shoot. But the most fun is when you play in a team that loves to play basketball as much as yourself and gains everything in a game. And so, I would like to tell you something about my team. In my team there are 6 players: Marvin, Arewic, Niels, Maurice, Manuel and myself. I train with my team every week on Thursdays from three o’clock in the afternoon to half past five. We have fun, when we play together and we have taken part in a lot of competitions. Our last competition has been one week ago and we have won it. Here you can see the medals that we have won. In the future, I will play together with Marvin in the district league in Freital. This has been my presentation about my favourite hobby basketball. I hope you have enjoy it and when you have any questions, please simply ask me.

PS:
Am Ende: I hope you have enjoyed it. (ed)

Guten Tag,

Danke chön ist wirklich gut … ja weiss ich das man nach einem foul 2 freiwürfe bekommt oder sogar 3 wollte nur sagen das von der freiwurf linie gild ein korb ein punkt

trotzdem danke :smile:

Darf ich Sie fragen, welches Ihre Muttersprache ist?

Gruß, Katja