Hey Leute,
ich hab hier einen Englischen Text. Könntet Ihr mal rüber schauen ob Ihr irgendwo Fehler seht müsst nicht alles korrektieren nur wenn Ihr was sehen solltet … wäre echt nett von euch
Today I would like tell you something about my favorite hobby. My favorite hobby is basketball. Of course I have other hobby´s such as talking with friend or playing football but basketball is my favorite hobby and sport. Why? That I´ll tell you later. At first I would like tell you some broad fakes about the rules and the constructions of a basketball game. The field in a basketball game is 28 meters long and 15 meters wide and on each side is a basket. The target is to throw the ball into the basket and which team has on the end of the game the most points, win the game. A game takes 4 times 10 Minutes. In team there are 5 players: the shooting guard, the point guard, the center, the power forward and the small forward. The game starts with the so called “jump-ball”. The jump-ball makes the referee. He goes to the middle of the field and throws the ball in the high and one player from each team jump and try to get the ball. Now I tell you the “point-rules” in a game. If you shoot the ball in this zone and you score a basket you will get 2 points. There also a 3-point-line and when you score a basket from this line you will get 3 points. And when you will shoot the ball and somebody fouls you, you get a free-throw. And if you score there a basket you will get 1 point. So that was the board rules and constructions of a basketball game. Now I would like tell: Why is basketball my favorite hobby? Basketball is my favorite hobby, because I love it. I love to play basketball, I love the feeling when you shoot the ball and I love the tension on the end of the game. And also I love when I do a rebound or a block. A Rebound is when somebody misses a shoot and you are the player, who jump higher as the other players and gets the ball and a block is when somebody will shot the ball and you block this shoot and prevent this shoot. But the most fun is when you have a team that are also love to play basketball and which gets everything in a game. And so I would like tell you something about my team. In my team there are also 6 players: Marvin, Arewic, Niels, Maurice, Manuel and I. I train with my team every week on Thursdays from 3 o´clock to half past 5. We have fun, when we play together and we have take part on a lot of competitions. Our last competition was for 1 week and we have won the competition. Heir you can see the medals, which we have won. In the future I will play together with Marvin in the district-League in Freital. That’s was my presentation about my favorite hobby basketball. I hope you have enjoy it and when you have any questions , you can ask me.
schließlich bin ich kein „native speaker“, aber es waren schon einige Fehler drin - siehe unten.
) Ich bin zwar keine Englisch-Lehrerin, aber Englisch ist eines meiner Hobbys.