Guten Tag,
ich sollte eine Charakterisierung über einen jungen schreiben und das halt auf Englisch. die Geschichte kennt ihr bestimmt: Moon by Chaim Potok
Zu charakterisieren war halt Moon:
Moon Vinten is the main-person in the story Moon by
Chaim Potok. His real name is Morgan Vinten but he hate
it. So his nickname is Moon because he has a small pale
face, straight black hair and a blue ponytail. It’s
look like the moon.He is thirteen years old and too
small and thin for his age. Also he wear a small silver
ring at his right ear and has dark angry eyes. He likes
rock musik and play the drums in a rock band.If he is
angry, he begin to counts in his mind. His parents told
him that in the following days there will be a boy from
Pakistan. The boy called Ashraf and got free from a
carpet factory in pakistan. He like the beatlles, like
Moon, too. Also he is a drummer but he don’t need a
drum he can also play with his finger’s on the table
for example. Moon don’t like it to allowe a other
person to play his drum. But when ashraf ask him to
play with his drum he allowed it him. He like the music
and record that. As Asrhaf kill by a truck he was
shocked and play his drums to the bongo music which
Ashraf play.His parents are not so sad.
Wie findet ihr das? hab ich fehler?
danke