Hallo!
Wir haben eine Hausaufgabe aufbekommen und sollen über die Person „Tom Connell“ etwas schreiben. Ich würde das gerne vortragen - am besten natürlich Fehlerfrei. Deswegen würde ich es sehr nett von Euch finden, wenn ihr die Fehler korrigieren würdet:
_Tim Connell is a person, who is often on businesstrip. As he was a childhood he wanted to be a astronaut and he wanted to travel the world. When Alex was 2 years old Tom Connell left him an traveld to Australia, where he founded a new family with 3 persons: Mary, her wife, Dominic and Luke, the kids.
For Tom the marriage to Alison was a mistake, nevertheless he likes his new life, which is for him very exciting.
Tom was on the one side very happy to meet Alex, because he got the chance, to exchange with Alex, but on the other side he was scared to meet him._
Ich weiß nun nicht, welche Zeitform man für eine Personenbeschreibung schreiben sollte, ich habe Vergangenheit gewähnt.
Danke schon mal!