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The movie „Bend it like Beckham“ deals with an Indian girl called Jess Bhamra, a young woman,who is in a conflict between two cultures.
Jess often plays football in the park.
One day Jules, a member of the womens football team Hounslaw Harrires, discovers her talent and invites Jess to take part in the practice. Her parents want to keep up Indian traditions and culture and so they do not want to see their daughter in shorts.They forbid Jess to play football in the team,but after a time Jess does it secretly.She lies that she has a holiday job.Jess and Jules become very good friends,but their friendship has to pass a severe test because both of them love their coach Joe.At the end of the film the Hounslaw Harriers plays an important final and Jess can not take part, because it is the day of her sisters wedding.
Jess is looking so sad that her father allows her to play the second half.
They win the match and an American talent scout invites Jess and Jules to Canta Clara for a scholarship.Although Mrs. and Mr. Bhamra have a bad feeling, they let their daughter go.