Bewerbung: Cover Letter

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1

Hallo,

ich möchte eine englische bewerbung schreiben auf eine trainee stelle. wäre super, wenn mal jemand drüber schaut und mir sagt, wie er es findet!
Ist der englische Lebenslauf genauso aufgebaut wie der deutsche?? TAUSEND DANK!!!

Dear Sir or Madame,

XY(company) is one of the biggest und most successful xy centres in the United Kingdom. I am very interested to become part of the company. I am currently seeking for a position as a Sales Trainee.
My background includes experiences in Business Administration. I did a two-year training in the XY Centre Hamburg in which I took action in the following departments: guarantee, customer relationship management, personnel department, disposition, service, counter, after sales, sales and fleet management.
I enjoy working with customers and my most important aim is to do everything for the customer’s contentedness. My ambition makes me work hard for my own high aims. I don’t care to work overtime for my job.
I would enjoy meeting with you to share what I can bring to XY.

Thank you for your attention.

Sincerely,

2

Hi

klingt alles sehr holprig und es sind dinge drin, die man so nicht sagt. vielleicht waere es besser du schreibst nur eine kurze note a la „please find attached my CV for the advertised position …“. ist nicht so unueblich und kein faux pax wie in deutschland, es sei denn sie wollen explizit einen CL.

nein, der engl. CV is ganz, ganz anders. das kannst du aber selber irgendwo nachlesen. nicht nur vom aufbau her, sondern man traegt auch einfach viel dicker auf.

du musst dich da nochmal einlesen und dann nochmal drueber gucken.

3

also ich muss schon eine richtige bewerbung schreiben, es ist eine hausarbeit…wenn ich google, findet man so viele sachen, aber wenig brauchbares finde ich…

4

Hallo,

du bist vor allen Dingen im falschen Brett. Frag mal im Fremdsprachenbrett nach. Du kannst auch im Archiv gucken (im Fremdsprachenbrett). Da sind einige Leute, die nicht nur in Englisch 1A sind, sondern auch etwas von Bewerbungen verstehen.

Gruß
eklastic

5

Das ist nur fuer eine Hausarbeit?

Wenn du einen Ansprechpartner hast: Yours sincerely
Wenn du keinen hast: Yours faithfully

Cover letter: max. 1 Seite, nicht zu viele Infos
CV: Max. 2 Seiten, detailliert, ueber google gibt es jede Menge Beispiele, auch auf monster.co.uk, totaljobs.com, reed.co.uk

Was meinst du mit „disposition“?

=> Eine Bewerbung auf eine Stellenauschreibung koennte so aussehen:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Ref. xxxxx Sales Trainee

In response to the advertised position on totaljobs.com on 15 April 2008, please consider my CV in your search for a Sales Trainee.

I have recently completed a two-year training in Business Administration at the XX Centre in Hamburg, Germany, where I acquired strong organisational and administrative skills within various departments, such as Sales, After-Sales, Customer Services, Complaints, HR and Fleet Management. I enjoy building and maintaining relationships with internal and external customers and have been confirmed as a goal-orientated achiever. I am highly motivated and proactive with a positive approach.

My previous role as xxxxxxxxxxx finished at the end of March/recently/
My current role does not give me the opportunity to progress within the company/

and I am now looking to advance my career in Sales.

I can be available immediately/within xx weeks.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you how my skills and qualities meet the requirements stated in the advertisement. I am available for an interview at your convenience and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

xxxxx

=> Ein speculative cover letter koennte so aussehen (ist nicht von mir, hoert sich aber gut an), musst du nur entsprechend abaendern:

Dear Miss/Ms/Mr xxxx,

I am writing to enquire whether you have a vacancy in your company for a Quality Assurance Manager. I enclose a copy of my CV for your consideration.
As you will see from my CV, I am currently working for Gepo Foods as the Senior Quality Assurance Technician. In my present position I am responsible for managing all quality assurance in Gepo Foods’ Manchester factory. I have worked closely with the Production Department and have been able to identify problems before they affected production deadlines.

Over the last year I have implemented BS5750/ISO 9000 throughout our factory. This meant rewriting many of the company’s procedures and in some cases creating new procedures. I successfully obtained accreditation at the first attempt within the Board’s six-month timescale.

With my proven ability to manage and maintain the highest QA standards whilst also minimising costs, I feel that I would be able to make a significant contribution to your company’s management team.

I would be grateful if you would contact me if you have any vacancies in your company, or keep my information on file in case of future openings. I would welcome hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

xxxx