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Hallo Experten.
Kann ein native speaker mal über das von mir verfasste profil sehen und mir sagen ob ich Fehler reingebracht habe? Vielen Dank schon mal!

Servus!

I am 48 and a sales mgr. for trucks in Munich, the capital of the Free State of Bavaria in the south of the Federal Republic of Germany.

I´m married and we have a 10 y.o. son. We live 40 km out of the city in a small village, ruled by two Maine Coon cats. As a native Bavarian, of course I own a pair of Lederhosen (leather trousers) and all the Bavarian gear you could see at the Munich Oktoberfest. Nevertheless I used to travel a lot and I´m proud to be part of an international company.
I like cooking, skiing in the nearby alps and in the summertime I love to ride my wifes Vespa scooter (300 GTS). Once a year, for a few days, we ride together to Italy on it.
I’m a Slow Food member. http://www.slowfood.com

Since I was a little boy I love both writing to and receiving mail from all over the world. The thought of bringing a little bit of joy in someones day anywhere in our world just pleases me.

In my eyes a card should travel without protection. Scars are beautiful (no envelope please).

The cards with traditional costumes of your region or weird motives or art or a view on your place are the ones I like most (but I appreciate any other card as well, except monkeys and clowns. I always mistrusted them).
If it happens you’ve got a Vespa card please send it to me.

If you are from Japan: I like Ukiyo-e paintings very, very much.

And if you are from Finland: The one and only idol I´ve ever had is the Snufkin. In addition to this I gravitate to the mysterious Hattifnatters just like the Moominpappa does.

For the Austrian neighbours: A tipp fuer a guade Wirtschaft mid am authentischen Essn warad super.

If you want, write what you think of VOLVO trucks on your card. Doesn’t matter if you’ve got no clue about trucks.

Thanks for reading and „Pfiad Di!“ from Bavaria.

Hallo, nette Grüße von einer anderen Postcrossing-Anhängerin. Ich habe zwar ‚nur‘ Englisch studiert und 25 Jahre unterrichtet, aber ich werde dies trotzdem korrigieren… :smile:) Ich schreibe die Korrekturen einfach in den Text hinein.

Servus!

I am 48 and a sales mgr. for trucks in Munich, the capital of
the Free State of Bavaria in the south of the Federal Republic
of Germany.

I´m married and we have a 10 y.o. son. We live 40 km out of (statt out of: away from)
the city in a small village, ruled by two Maine Coon cats. As
a native Bavarian, of course I own a pair of Lederhosen
(leather trousers) and all the Bavarian gear you can see at
the Munich Oktoberfest. Nevertheless I used to travel a lot
and I´m proud to be part of an international company.
I like cooking, skiing in the nearby alps and in the
summertime I love to ride my wifes (wife’s) Vespa scooter (300 GTS).
Once a year, for a few days, we ride (together ist überflüssig) to Italy on it.
I’m a Slow Food member. http://www.slowfood.com

Since I was a little boy I love (es muss heißen: have loved - typisch deutscher Fehler! Wenn etwas in der Vergangenheit angefangen hat und andauert, MUSS das Present Perfect genommen werden) both writing to besser: (sending mail to people) and receiving
mail from all over the world. The thought of bringing a little
bit of joy in (into) someones (someone’s) day anywhere in our world just pleases
me.

In my eyes a card should travel without protection. Scars (besser: creases) are
beautiful (no envelope please).

The cards with traditional costumes of your region or weird
motives or art or a view on your place are the ones I like
most (but I appreciate any other card as well, except monkeys
and clowns. I (have) always mistrusted them).
If it happens you’ve got (besser: if you happen to have) a Vespa card please send it to me.

If you are from Japan: I like Ukiyo-e paintings very, very
much.

And if you are from Finland: The one and only idol I´ve ever
had is the Snufkin. In addition to this I gravitate to the
mysterious Hattifnatters just like (the weglassen) Moominpappa does.

For the Austrian neighbours: (Oan Tipp) fuer a guade Wirtschaft
mid am authentischen Essn warad super.

If you want, write what you think of VOLVO trucks on your
card. Doesn’t matter if you’ve got no clue about trucks.

Thanks for reading and „Pfiad Di!“ (God bless you) from Bavaria.