Hallo,
ich habe Probleme meine eigene Meinung in Englisch zu verfassen
Wäre jemand so freundlich und liest mal Korrektur? Ich versuche zur Zeit übung zu bekommen aber ohne Feedback is das ziemlich schwer…
I think its a good thing to be a donor it s help many ill peoples ant their families. But I don’t know wheather i become an organ donor. On the one hand I would have an another oppinion if a friend or a relative need an organ but on the one hand i can reconstruct peoples how said that they don’t want to be an organ donor. To force the organ donation is no solution.
Ich denke es ist eine gute Sache ein Organspender zu sein, es hilft vielen Kranken Menschen und ihren familein. Aber ich weiss nicht ob ich ein Organspender werden würde. Auf der einen Seite kann ich Leute nachvolziehen die sagen, dass sie keine Organspender sein wollenaber auf der anderen Seite würde ich wahrscheinlich eine andere Meinung haben wenn ein Freund oder Verwanter ein organ bräuchte. Aber organspende zu erwzingen ist keine Lösung (und das würde glaube ich auch keiner mitmachen.)
Bis auf den Satz in Klammern habe ich alles übersetz(t)en können.
LG
Hallo
Ich schreibe die richtigen Wörter in Klammern hinter die Fehler, ok?
I think its (it’s für it is) a good thing to be a donor it s help (it helps)many ill
peoples (people. peoples= Völker) ant (and) their families. But I don’t know wheather (whether, if. weather- das Wetter) i (I) become (would become, would want to become, donate my organs…)
an organ donor. On the one hand I would (might) have an another (another, ohne an)
oppinion (opinion), if a friend or a relative need (needed. Conditionalregeln nachkucken 
) an organ but on the
one (other) hand i (I) can reconstruct peoples how said that they don’t
want to be an organ donor(I can understand people who say. reconstruct heisst nicht nachvollziehen) . To force (Forcing) the (the würd ich weglassen) organ donation is no
solution.(but I don’t think anyone would do that)
mfg
Galadriel
Hallo
Ich schreibe die richtigen Wörter in Klammern hinter die
Fehler, ok?
mfg
Galadriel
Danke für deine Korrektur, ich habe heute nochmal eine Zusammenfassung in einem Satz bzw. eine Kurze Stellungnahme geschrieben.
Hättest du Lust diese nochmal kurz zu überfliegen?
My little summery
The text „A question of road safety“deals with the question whether old people should be forced to take a medical and driving test to stay on the road in Austria. (In most states and territories in Austria must all drivers over 85 make a test to keep their driving licences.)
Should older drivers have to take driving tests?
On the one hand is it right that old people forget many things, get slower and fragiler, so they make little or big mistakes in the traffic.
But on the other hand is it right that young people often not be careful, too. They over cross red traffic lights in stressful situation and drink sometimes at the weekend and drive even so. And that is also very dangerous for everyone.
Rodger Black has my full support when he agues that the government should bring up the young drivers to be more careful on the road.
I do not think anyone would be really disagree with the compromise that young and old people have to make a medical and driving test to stay on the road if there are still fit and don’t take drugs. To sum up and in my opinion should all people to force or anyone.
Hallo,
The text „A question of road safety“d eals with the issue
whether old people should be forced to take a medical and
driving test to stay on the road in Austria. (In most states
and territories in Austria all drivers over the age of 85 have to take a test in order to keep their driving licences.)
Should older drivers have to take driving tests?
On the one hand ,** it is true** that old people forget [-]
things, get slower and more fragile , so they are prone to make little or big
mistakes in [-]traffic.
But on the other hand ,** it is also true that young 
eople often are less careful**.
They [-]cross red traffic lights in
stressful situation s and may sometimes drink and drive. And that is also very dangerous for everyone.
(Nebenfrage: Alte Fahrer besaufen sich nicht oder seltener??)
Rodger Black has my full support when he a r gues that the
government should educate the young drivers to be more
cautious when driving. (or: to drive more carefully)
I do not think anyone would [-]really disagree with the
compromise that young and old people have to take a medical
and driving test to stay on the road if there are (meinst du: if they are) still fit
and don’t take drugs.
(hier verstehe ich nicht, was du sagen willst: Warum ist es ein Kompromiss, dass alte und junge einen medizinischen UND einen Fahrtest machen müssen, wenn sie fit genug sind und keine Drogen nehmen – meinst du: OB sie fit genug sind bzw. keine Drogen nehmen? -->
I don’t think anyone would disagree to have young and old people tested for driving fitness as well as drug abuse.
To sum up and in my opinion should all
people to force or anyone.
?? meinst du: alle müssten gezwungen werden oder keiner? -->
To sum it up, in my opinion all people should have to take tests or no one.
Gruß
eklastic
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Hi!
Ich bin zwar nicht Galadriel aber mein Vorschlag wäre:
My small summary:
The text "A question of road safety” deals with the question whether old people should be forced to take a medical and a driving test to keep their driving licences in Austria. (In most states and territories in Austria all drivers over 85 have to take a test to keep their driving licences.)
Should older drivers be forced to take driving tests?
On the one hand is it right that old people forget many things, they may get slower and more fragile, so they could make small or big mistakes whilst driving.
But on the other hand is it right that young people are often very careless too. They cross red traffic lights in tricky situations and sometimes drink at the weekends and they still drive despite this. This is also very dangerous for everyone involved.
Rodger Black has my full support when he argues that the government should teach the young drivers to be more careful.
I do not think anyone would really disagree with the compromise, that young and old people should have to pass a medical and a driving test to keep their driving licence to confirm that they are still fit and don’t take drugs. ( To sum up and in my opinion should all people to force or anyone.)
Das verstehe ich leider nicht
LG
Hallo,
I do not think anyone would [-]really disagree with the
compromise that young and old people have to take a medical
and driving test to stay on the road if there are (meinst du: if they are) still fit
and don’t take drugs.
(hier verstehe ich nicht, was du sagen willst: Warum ist es
ein Kompromiss, dass alte und junge einen medizinischen UND
einen Fahrtest machen müssen, wenn sie fit genug sind und
keine Drogen nehmen – meinst du: OB sie fit genug sind bzw.
keine Drogen nehmen? -->
Ich wollte sagen Ich denke nicht das jemand dagegen wäre wenn junge und alte Menschen die test machen müssten es sei den sie sind nicht mher fit oder nehmen drogen.
I don’t think anyone would disagree to have young and old
people tested for driving fitness as well as drug abuse.
To sum up and in my opinion should all
people to force or anyone.
?? meinst du: alle müssten gezwungen werden oder keiner?
ja genau
–>
To sum it up, in my opinion all people should have to take
tests or no one.
Gruß
eklastic
Danke für deine rasche Antwort und für deine Korrekktur.
Hast du ggf. tipps für mich wie ich mein englisch verbessern kann?
LG
Hallo
Hast du ggf. tipps für mich wie ich mein englisch verbessern
kann?
Wenn man fragen darf, wie alt bist du und welches Level Englisch macht ihr gerade? (Elementary, Pre-Intermediate?)
Was hilft ist lesen, um ein Gefühl für Sprachfluss und Syntax zu bekommen. Dann gibts noch eine Menge Sites im Net wo du übungen findest, zb www.englischhilfen.de
Sonst kannst du mir auch mailen, wenn du spezielle Probleme hast.
mfg
Galadriel