Englisch Sätze

Guten Morgen

Tut mir leid, dass ich nochmals anklopfe, aber ich wäre unheimlich dankbar um eine allerletzte Hilfestellung.

In our company I’m responsible for the static calculation, for the design of our product and the services…

To illustrate how fast the manufacture process is going on I will show you a short movie.

Sumarizing it can be said, that our concept is simple and efficient.

The first step is to examine whether the ground is capable of carrying the weight. Then we make sure that the structural safety is waranted

In this room the student will find everything they need, the kitchen is fitted with oven cooking stove and a microwave.
Let us cast a glance in the bathroom, that is the equipped with a shower and a sink.
Let’s go to the bed-room. Next a comfortably bed, is there a TV and a small table.
For student it particularly important to have a conventional well-established study room. Naturally we have pay attention on this demand as you can see.

They save money and the environment.
Our manufacture process is very environemtal-friendly. Because we use local raw materials and the material waste is reducing.
Further the most material are recyclable or re-usuable and the building is energy-efficient, because of the high technology insulation.

Vielen Dank, Gruss Marc

In our company I am responsible for the static calculation, for the design of our product s and for the service ( hier ohne ‚s‘!).

To illustrate how fast the manufactur ing process is going on I will show you a short presentation.

In summary you can say , that our concept is simple and efficient.

At first it has to be examined, whether the ground is suitable for the weight-loading. Then we make sure that the safety of the structure is guaranteed.

In this room the student s will find everything they need, the
kitchen is equipped with a stove (incl. baking oven) and a microwave.
(Anm.: und was ist mit dem Kühlschrank? :smile: {= refrigerator}

Let’s have a look at the bathroom, which comprises:a shower and a sink?? -> sink = Abfluss, hier kann ich nur raten; vermute Du meinst entweder Waschbecken (washbasin) oder Badewanne (bath tub).

In the bed-room you find a TV -set and a small table next to a comfortabl e bed.

Particularly for students it is important to have a conventional,
well-established study . Of course we have to pay attention
to this requisition as you can see.

They are both economical and environmental-friendly.

Our manufactur ing process is very environemtally friendly ( in diesem Fall ohne Bindestrich!). Because we use local raw materials and the waste of material has been reduced.

Furthermore most of the material is recyclable or can be reused ( ist doch eigentl. das gleiche, oder?)
and the building is energy-efficient, because of its high-tech insulation.

Gruß,Rummo

P.S: Gibt’s bei Euch keinen Brückenkurs Englisch? würde ich sehr empfehlen!!

Hallo Rummo,

nix für ungut, aber da klingt vieles einfach zu sehr 1:1 übersetzt - inklusive diverser Kommata, die im Englischen nicht gesetzt werden (z.B. vor that und whether)…

Da der Fragesteller aber generell nicht sooo extrem einsichtig ist (siehe Diskussion ein Stückchen weiter oben), habe ich ehrlich gesagt auch keine Lust, das Ganze zu überarbeiten. ;o)

Gruß
„Raven“

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