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The London Olympics

London hosted the Olympic Games in 1948 although the country was poor. There was a lack of food and accommodation and therefore sports people had to stay with family they did not know. In addition they were responsible for their own food and gear. As opposed to today athletes trained less, because it was not so important to win.
A housewife from Holland became very rich, because no woman before her had won 4 gold medals. Even though there were a lot of obstacles the games were successful. Nowadays athletes are generously sponsored by well known firms and it is their utmost aim to win.
In order to be successful again, Londoners have to unite.

Hallo,

…to stay with families…

Was ist der rote Faden?

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