Englisch - Text richtig?

Hallo zusammen,

ich mus für Englishc 2 kurze Fragen möglichst ausführlich, jedoch in kurzen und nciht zu verwirten Sätzen beantworten. Quasi, dass es jeder versteht. Bitte prüft, ob das so richtig zu sein scheint…

  1. What is the difference between the purchasing and the sales market?

On the purchasing market the wholesalers make enquiries to find out the favorable price from different suppliers and manufacturer. The supplier and manufacturer submit offers with their term of delivery, terms of payment, the prices and possible discounts. And if the wholesaler finds the best price he places an order with the supplier or the manufacturer.

On the sales market wholesalers submit offers to retailers and private consumers.

  1. Name the intermediaries of the wholesaler and describe their tasks.

The important intermediary of a wholesaler is the bank, because a wholesaler needs a lot of money e.g. to open new subsidiaries, to expand or for a new product. So he asks the bank for a loan. When he has enough securities the bank will grant the loan.

Furthermore the forwarding agent is also an important intermediary of a wholesaler, because he transports the goods to the retailers and the private consumers.

Vielen lieben Dank!

Teufelchen

Hi little devil

ich bin nicht der Englisch-Fachmann, aber ich würds in etwa so schreiben:

ich mus für Englishc 2 kurze Fragen möglichst ausführlich,
jedoch in kurzen und nciht zu verwirten Sätzen beantworten.
Quasi, dass es jeder versteht. Bitte prüft, ob das so richtig
zu sein scheint…

  1. What is the difference between the purchasing and the sales
    market?

On the purchasing market the wholesalers make enquiries to
find out the favorable price from different suppliers and
manufacturer s. The supplier s and manufacturer s submit their offers with
their term s of delivery, terms of payment, the prices and
possible discounts. And if the wholesaler finds the best price
he places an order with the supplier or the manufacturer.

The wholesaler places an order with the supplier or the manufacturer, who offers the best purchase price.

On the sales market wholesalers submit offers to retailers and
private consumers.

  1. Name the intermediaries of the wholesaler and describe
    their tasks.

The most important intermediary of a wholesaler is the bank,
because as a wholesaler needs a lot of money funds e.g. to open new
subsidiaries, to expand or for to purchase new products. So he asks the
bank for a loan financement. When he has enough :securities

(securities ist zwar nicht falsch, wird aber im Bankwesen eher für Wertpapiere gebraucht, du meinst vermutlich Sicherheiten = collateral) :the bank will grant the loan.

Furthermore the forwarding agent is also an important
intermediary of a wholesaler, because he transports the goods
to the retailers and the private consumers.

ich kenne den Kontext nicht, aber sind mit intermediaries nicht auch die Einzelhändler gemeint? Die sind doch eigentlich am wichtigsten für einen Grosshändler, weil der kaum direkt an die Kunden verkauft. Nur so eine Idee

Gruss
ExNicki