Hallo ihr lieben,
muss am Dienstag einen 5 minütigen Referat halten und mit dem jeweiligen Thema eine Diskussion einführen, diese sollte die gesamte Lektion ausfüllen.
Nun würde ich mich sehr über eine Verbesserung meines Textes freuen. Rechtschreibfehler sind nicht so wichtig ( ausser bei Mehrzahl „s“ vergessen) eher die Zeiten und Grammtik…
wäre sehr dankbar!
hello everybody
If you have any questions, feel free to interrupt me or ask me them at the end.
So my presentation is about alcohol but mainly about teenagers drinking.
Alcohol is a part of most people lives from their teens onwards.(ab) Experience with alcohol begins at an early age, typically in the form of a glass of wine shared with parents.
…im sure this situation is well-known by you (? )
Children’s behaviour and attitudes are strongly influenced by their parents and the world around them, but also by media… It’s the parents responsibility to teach their kids to drink sensibly(=vernünftig) Parents who don’t allow their children to drink at home turn a blind eye to their drinking at parties where there is no adult supervision(aufsicht). But however socially acceptable, wide-spread(=weit verbrietet) and common(=üblich) alcohol is, it is still a dangerous drug But infortunately this point doesn’t hold teenagers up(=aufhalten) to drink. Alcohol is a legal drug and you can get it if you really want it, it doesn´t matter how old you are.
Mainly the reason of teenage drinking is, that many young people have problems, they have problems with their parents, in school with friends or because of group pressure.
But still Alcohol is not the key to enjoying yourself. It lowers your inhibitions(=hemmungen) and makes you merry(beschwipst,spassig) for a short time. It also makes it harder to co-ordinate (=koordineren) or to reason(=vernünftig reden/sein). Pretty soon you are behaving in a way you would never dream of normally, or you are starting to feel dizzy(=schwindelig) or being sick. Staying sober(=nüchtern bleiben) has more benefits(=vorteile) than you might realise. You have nothing to regret (bedauern) the next morning because you have been in control all night. . They don’t understand the risks they are taking. As a result they get drunk, lose their inhibitions(hemmungen), become violent, drink and drive
The alcoholic illness grows slowly over years. A teenager who doesn´t consume much alcohol now, could be involved in the apparently harmless legal drug alcohol in a couple of years. My opinion about alcohol is, that many of the people aren’t aware of the dangher of alcohol, alcohol is a drug. It´s legal, but it´s still a drug and the number of alcohol adicted peopel is growing and growing.
1.) What do you think are more reasons why teenagers are drinking?
2.) Why do shops and petrol stations still sell alcohol to minors(0minderjährige) and break the law?
3.) Should we offer an enlightenment ?
4.) The alcohol producers offer more and more alcohol drinks with different tastes,coulours and tempt (locken) teenagers with new designs. You think its a good idea? Should it be forbidden by law?
5.) Is it a hopeless situation or could we do something? I mean at the end it’s in their own hands…