Hallo, ich möchte mein Englisch verbessern und habe deshalb den Anfang einer Geschichte übersetzt. Würde bitte jemand drübersehen und mir meine größten Fehler sagen?
Ich möchte nicht!, dass es neu Übersetzt wird, ehe dachte ich an Hilfestellungen wie: Satzbau falsch, falsche Zeitform, dieses oder jenes Wort passt nicht, klingt zu Deutsch …
The sky war steel grey. Only few sunbeams manage to break through he thick dark clouds which makes the city seems dreary and joyless. There were hardly any people on the streets because of the sharply cold wind blows under the clothes and freezing the bones. And since it was a Sunday, only a few cars were on the road now. The mostly overcrowded beach was empty. The icy weaves hit the sand and turn back to the sea just to attack the beach again at the next moment.
A lonely yellow beetle drove along the coast road, a suprising spot of color in all the gray. Bob was on his way home from a visit to relatives. His parents hadn’t gone with him, because his mother had caught a flu because of the unusually cold weather in the autumn and infected his father. Thus, Bad had traveled alone to his aunt for the weekend. Deep in thought, he huimmed a song from the radio and put the heating a little higher. In a couple of minutes he would arrive in town. But the moment he thought this the engine died and the beetle stopped.
Bob sat dumbfounded behind the wheel for a second than he cursed and tried to start the car again. Unsuccessfully, after several attempts, nothing happened.
„S**t,“ Bob complained, when he got out of the car. At least, no traffic was around. He pulled out his mobile phone from the pocket of his jeans and called the breakdown service.
After Bob hung up he thought that even there were no other cars on the road he should not leave his beetle in the middle of the street. With a sigh, he released the handbrake and started to push the beetle forwards steering with one hand on the steering wheel. He hardly made any progress.
„Hell damn,“ Bob growled and gave up as his gaze fell on someone at the beach. Despite of the bad weather, there was someone sitting in the sand and staring at the waves. Bob went toward the person. „Excuse me!“ he started to call before running across the street. „Could you help me, please?“ The person turned around.
Wäre lieb, wenn mir jemand hilft.
lumipallo
