Englisch übersetzung

AUF DEUTSCH :
Die Reportage soll im kleinen Rahmen zeigen,wie ich mir die Tage in Woodstock ausmalen würde.
Es ist zwar nur ein kurzer Ausschnitt,dennoch sind alle für mich wichtigen und positiven Faktoren des Bewusstseins während des Festivals vorhanden.
Denn diese Faktoren,nämlich Love,Peace and Freedom sind die interessanten Gefühle und Lebenseinstellungen die mich so an Woodstock faszinieren.
Vorallem faszinieren mich die Menschen die damals das Festival so legendär gemacht haben…
Die Art wie Sie ihr Leben gelebt haben und ihre Offenheit für andere.
Ich finde von so einem Verhalten kann man sich viel abgucken,was ich aber noch im weiteren Verlauf meiner Facharbeit beleuchten werde.

AUF ENGLISCH:
This reportage should show the way I imagine the days in Woodstock in little setting.
Indeed it is a short cutout nevertheless sind alle für mich wichtigen und positiven Faktoren des Bewusstseins während des Festivals vorhanden[?]
Because these elements,namely love,peace and freedom are the most interesting emotions and attitude towards life that fascinate me the most at woodstock.
Mainly the humans facinated me,whom made this festival so legendary.
The way the lived their life and their openess compared to others.
I think from this attitude we can learn a lot,what i will emblaze in the following process of my skilled work.

Wäre super nett wenn ihr mal drüber gucken könntet und verbesserung und hinzufügen würdet.
Auch was grammatik und so angeht.
LG

Hi Inga

AUF ENGLISCH:
This report should show to a small extent the way I imagine the days at Woodstock to be.
Although it is a short cutout, all important and positive elements of the consciousness throughout the festival can nevertheless be seen/experienced/are available. ?
It is these elements at Woodstock that fascinate me, namely love, peace and freedom, which are the most interesting emotions and attitudes towards life.
It is mainly the people who made this festival so legendary back then, who fascinate me.
The way they lived their life and their openness compared to others.
I think we can learn a lot from these attitudes which I will examine in the process of my course work.

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AUF ENGLISCH:
This report should briefly show the way I imagine the days in Woodstock. Although it is only a short glimpse, all important positive facts of the festival are to be seen.(dieser Teil ist auf deutsch schon nicht richtig verständlich, ich hoffe das meine englische Version das richtige wiedergibt)
Love, peace and freedom, which are the most interesting emotions and attitudes towards life, are the facts that fascinate me the most when thinking of Woodstock.
But most of all I am fascinated by the humans who made this festival so legendary, the way they lived their life and their openness.
I think we can learn a lot from their attitudes. That is what I want to show in my paper. ( oder essay)

This report should briefly show the way I imagine the days in Woodstock. Although it is only a short glimpse, all important positive facts of the festival are to be seen.(dieser Teil ist auf deutsch schon nicht richtig verständlich, ich hoffe das meine englische Version das Richtige wiedergibt)
Love, peace and freedom, which are the most interesting emotions and attitudes towards life, are the facts that fascinate me most when thinking of Woodstock.
But most of all I am fascinated by the humans who made this festival so legendary, the way they lived their lives and their openness.
I think we can learn a lot from their attitudes. That is what I want to show in my paper. ( oder essay)

Hallo Inga (vom Weltjugendtag denke ich, toll von Dir zu hören), und schreib noch mal, wenn ich Dir weiter helfen kann. Liebe Gruesse, Patricia
Ich schlage folgendes vor:

This reportage (oder: report) should show on a small scale the way I imagine the days in Woodstock.
Indeed this is a short excerpt, nevertheless all impressions that were important and positive for me during the festival are present.
Because these elements, namely love, peace and freedom are the most interesting emotions and attitudes towards life that fascinate me the most about Woodstock.
In particular, the humans who made this festival so legendary fascinated me.
The way in which they lived their lives and their openness towards others.
I think that we can learn a lot from this attitude as I will highlight in the process of my further work/assignment.