Hallo,
manche deiner Sätze klingen unbeholfen, wie eben jemand, der noch nicht so gut Englisch spricht. Wenn aber keine Fehler drin sind, habe ich sie stehen gelassen.
We often meet people who say that robots and machines are not
necessary.
On the one hand it’s true that we get less jobs.
it is (schriftlich)
we get less jobs because of robots and machines (was übrigens nicht unbedingt stimmt, nur ANDERE Jobs, aber das hat mit dem Englisch nichts zu tun.
The reason
for that is that robots and machines replace the workers.
The reason is that … („for that“ brauchts nicht).
For
example machines do the work in factory faster than an
employer.
in factories
than employees (employer = Arbeitgeber, employee=Arbeitnehmer).
Allerdings meinst du hier eher „worker“, employee ist im Zusammenhang das falsche Wort (im Deutschen sagst du ja auch nicht: die Arbeit wird von Arbeitnehmern gemacht).
Likewise you lose your ability to use your brain.
Similarily, you lose … (auch das ist eine fragliche Aussage).
That is why machines do all for us.
This is because machines do everything for us.
For instance to calculate
something you use a calculator and not your brain.
For instance, instead of using your brain to calculate one is using a calculator.
On the other hand I think we have more free time because the
robots do for example our housework.
On the other hand, if robots are used for housework it frees people from tedious chores and they have thus more spare time.
Equally they can do jobs
that are impossible for us.
Additionally, robots can do jobs that are…
Taking that as an example we never
can build a whole car so fast like a machine.
It is impossible for humans to build a car as fast as a machine can do it.
All in all I think the machines make our life comfortable.
Considering, I think machines make our life comfortable.
(all in all = Germanismus / keine bestimmten Pluralartikel in deinen Sätzen)
We
just lose stupid jobs like factory workers.
Therefore we earn
a lot of more intelligent people because they begin to learn
to get a job.
?? unverständlich
;Additionally when you don’t want to lose your
brain ability you have then to practice your brain with some
exercises.
In addition, for those worried to lose brain power they should train their brain cells with special exercises.
Cheers,
Elke
