Englisches Bewerbungsgespräch, Korrektur lesen

Hallo liebe Experten :smile:

Ich mal wieder :smile: Aber bald hab ich die Matura geschafft und dann nerve ich nicht mehr mit solchen Texten.
Ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn sich jemand die Zeit nehmen könnte um die gröbsten Fehler hier rauszufiltern.

Ein großes Dankeschön im Voraus!
liebe Grüße
Kati


A:Good morning Ms Keller. Please take a seat.

B:Good morning. Thank you very much.

A:Could you please characterize yourself in a few sentences?

B:I am a very self-motivated person, who can cope well with stressfull situations, either as part of a team or alone. I am straightforward and positive with a friendly disposition, which has helped me at further works.

A:smiley:o you have any previous experience in this field?

B:I did a several practical training period of 3 months in the advertisement company “Createam” where I acquired a lot of experiences. My main duties in this company were to keep the database up to date and to help designing the company’s website.

A:I see, why do you think are you the right person for this job?

B:My present job doesn’t offer me any promotion prospects. I am looking for a new challenge to use my skills to contribute positively to your company. I also want to broaden my horizon. Working with “name of the company” has always been my great ambition. I am a flexible person, who is willing to work abroad or longer hours.

A:Which programs are you familiar with?

B:I am able to work with all kinds of office work and the major graphic- and designprograms for example Photoshop, Freehand, Indesign, Flash, Dreamweaver and so on. Furthermore I obtained several courses to improve my telephon- and communication skills. The copies of the certificates are enclosed.

A:Can you tell me something about your educational background.

B:I attended a business high school specializing on computer technology and graphic design in Linz for the last 5 years which I graduated last summer with excellent marks. I am very interested in languages. I speak English fluently and have an intermediate level of Spanish.

A:Could you please talk about your strengths and weaknesses??

B:open_mouth:n the one hand one of my weaknesses is that I always want to be perfect in what I’m doing and want to discuss all problems. On the other hand I am very resilient and reliable and I am able to work well under pressure.

A:Thank you for the conversation. You will receive a letter about our decision next week.

B:Thank you very much for the opportunity to introduce myself personally. Goodbye.

A:Bye!

Hallo,
(ziemlich schnell) - vielleicht übersehe ich etwas :

A:Good morning Ms Keller. How are you?
B: Fine, thank you. And you?
A: Fine, thanks. Please take a seat. (Die Floskeln müssen rein, wenn es realistisch sein soll).

[:b:Good morning. Thank you very much.]

A:Could you please characterize yourself in a few sentences? (ist nicht falsch, aber wahrscheinlich würde man eher sagen: Can you tell me something about yourself?)

B:I am very self-motivated. I can cope well in
stressful situations, either as part of a team or alone. I am
straightforward and positive with a friendly disposition,
which has helped me at further works. (verstehe ich nicht, was meinst du mit „further works“? eventuell: which has helped me in the past)

A:smiley:o you have any previous experience in this field?

B:I completed a practical training period of 3 months with „Createam“, an advertising agency, where I acquired a lot of
experience. (experience hier Singular, wobei man streiten kann, ob man in drei Monaten VIEL Erfahrung sammeln kann). My main tasks were to keep the database up-to-date and help with designing the company’s
website.

A:I see, why do you think are you the right person for this
job?

B:My present job doesn’t offer me any advancement (oder "career prospects). I
am looking for a new challenge to use my skills to contribute
positively to your company. I also want to broaden my horizon.
Working with “name of the company” has always been my great
ambition. I am flexible and willing to work
abroad or longer hours.

A:Which programs are you familiar with?

B:I am able to work with all kinds of office software and the
major graphic and design programs for example Photoshop,
Freehand, Indesign, Flash, Dreamweaver and so on. Furthermore
I completed several training courses to improve my telephone and
communication skills. The copies of the certificates are
enclosed. (I have copies of the certificates with me if you are interested.) (*see LEO’s discussions on „Bewerbungsmappe“ for reference, i.e. it doesn’t exist)

A:Can you tell me something about your educational background?

B:I attended a business high school specializingin computer
technology and graphic design in Linz for the last 5 years
where I graduated last summer with excellent marks. I am very
interested in languages. I speak English fluently and have an
intermediate level of Spanish.

A:Could you please talk about your strengths and weaknesses??

B:open_mouth:n the one hand one of my weaknesses is that I always want
to be perfect in what I’m doing and want to discuss all
problems (vielleicht: and tend to lose myself a bit in details). On the other hand, I am very resilient and reliable
and I am able to work well under pressure.

A:Thank you for the conversation. You will receive a letter
about our decision next week.

B:Thank you very much for the opportunity to introduce myself
personally. Goodbye.

A:Bye!

Don’t call us, we call you :wink:
eklastic

Dankeschön für die schnelle Antwort und die Mühe :smile:

Don’t call us, we call you :wink:

*grins

liebe grüße
Kati