Hab mal etwas zu Fahrenheit geschrieben und wäre echt froh, wenn ihr die Sätze anschauen und korrigieren könntet, denn mein Englisch ist wirklich nicht sehr gut.
Bradbury warns from the consequence of the boundless consumption and the superficial entertainment, also from the lost of human closeness and virtuel sense and and refers to the dangers of cultural flattening by materialistic thinking and acting.
The story is divided into three chapter.
In the first chapter Monday meets Clarisse and the reader also obtained detail information how is the relation between Montag and his superior Beatty.
In chapter two the is the relationship between Monday and Faber.
The chapter 3 is occupied primarily the reltion from Montag to the bookpeople, with them he makes friend at the end of his escape
This three-division structures the change of the protagonist from the starting point over the hit way (eingeschlagenen Weg???) to the terminator point of his mental and social development
I think the main turning point is when he escapes from the police he decides against the predominating system. Thus he leaves his past behind and looks optimistically into a hopeful future
Hi!
Ich hab mal flüchtig korrigiert!
Bradbury warns about the consequences of boundless consumption and superficial entertainment, also about the loss of human closeness (and virtual sense ??) and refers to the dangers of cultural flattening by materialistic thinking and acting.
The story is divided into three chapters.
In the first chapter Monday meets Clarisse and the reader also obtains detailed information of the relationship between Montag and his superior Beatty.
In chapter two the is the relationship between Monday and Faber is described.
The chapter 3 is primarily deals with Montag’s relationship to the book people, he makes with them at the end of his escape
This three-division structures the change of the protagonist from the starting point over the hit way (eingeschlagenen Weg???) to the terminator point of his mental and social development
(Was meinst Du damit?)
I think the main turning point is when he escapes from the police he decides to oppose against the predominating system. Thus he leaves his past behind and optimistically looks into a hopeful future.
Gruß
Wenn ich darf…
Hi!
Ich hab mal flüchtig korrigiert!
Wenn ich meine Meinung kundtun darf, ich glaube der Lehrer/Dozent hat wenig bis kein Interesse daran, die (inexistente) Fehler einer Muttersprachlerin zu korregieren bzg zu begutachten, als vielmehr zu sehen und zu bewerten wie seine Schülern/Studenten mit dem Unterricht voran kommen.
Schöne Grüße,
Helena
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Hi!
Beachte bitte das Wort „flüchtig“!
Danke
Der Lehrer wird (wenn er das tatsächlich korrigieren sollte) schon merken ob der Schüler die Lektüre verstanden hat.
Gruß
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Hi Siân,
Entschuldige, bitte!
Ich wollte dich nicht kränken. Nichts weiter als das.
Nur ich mußte das sagen.
Schöne Grüße,
Helena
Hola Helena!
Du hast mich doch nicht gekränkt 
Liebe Grüße
Siân