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#1

Hallo,

bei den folgenden Text müssen 5 Fehler gefunden werden, ich bin mir allerdings nicht sicher ob ich sie alle richtig habe.

Meine gefunden Fehler:
Zeile 1 say=says
Zeile 5 shrunk=shrunken
Zeile 8 provide=providing
Zeile 12 working=work
Zeile 16 many=much

1 The size of your office say a lot about your status.
2 A big office normal means that you have a high
3 position in the company. But in the US, „big“ no longer
4 means the same as it once did. Since 1997, the
5 average size of a top manager’s office has shrunk by
6 almost 15 per cent. Office workers have lost about 10
7 per cent of their workspace. Some companies now
8 provide cubicles instead of separate offices, and
9 others have moved to smaller buildings.

10 Putting managers in smaller offices saves money,
11 but that is not the only reason for the change.
12 Many bosses now prefer to working among their
13 employees instead of being alone in a big office.
14 Young managers, especially, seem to have no
15 problem sharing space. „The younger generation is
16 many less focused on the entitlement of office
17 space,“ Barry Ludlow of TPG Architecture said
18 The New York Times. " They are much less territorial

Kann mir jemand sagen ob die gefunden Fehler so richtig sind bzw. wo ich etwas falsch habe?

Vielen Dank für jede Hilfe!!!

#2

Hallo,

hab’s mir mal durchgelesen. Und mein nichtfachmännischer Tipp:

Zeile 8 provide=providing

ich denke wenn du providing nimmst, dann muss das „are providing“ heissen.

Zeile 12 working=work

oder du kannst working lassen und dafür „to“ streichen.

Mal sehen was die Experten sagen…

LG

#3

Hallo!

Ich habe einen weiteren Fehler gefunden und einen Deiner Fehler herausgenommen.

Zeile 1 say=says

Zeile 2 normal (Adjective) => normally (Adverb)

Zeile 5 shrunk=shrunken
Zeile 8 provide=providing
Zeile 12 working=work
Zeile 16 many=much

Viele Gruesse,

Marcus

#4

Line 2 normally

#5

Hallo,

Zeile 1 say=says

Zeile 2: normal=normally

Zeile 5 shrunk=shrunken

Diese Form ist korrekt, es gibt bei „to shrink“ Varianten für beide Vergangenheitsformen (shrank/shrunk, shrunk/shrunken).

Zeile 8 provide=providing

Nein, „provide“ ist korrekt.

Zeile 12 working=work

Fehler richtig erkannt. Ich persönlich würde aber „prefer working“ bevorzugen.

Zeile 16 many=much

Zeile 17 said=told

1 The size of your office say a lot about your status.
2 A big office normal means that you have a high
3 position in the company. But in the US, „big“ no longer
4 means the same as it once did. Since 1997, the
5 average size of a top manager’s office has shrunk by
6 almost 15 per cent. Office workers have lost about 10
7 per cent of their workspace. Some companies now
8 provide cubicles instead of separate offices, and
9 others have moved to smaller buildings.

10 Putting managers in smaller offices saves money,
11 but that is not the only reason for the change.
12 Many bosses now prefer to working among their
13 employees instead of being alone in a big office.
14 Young managers, especially, seem to have no
15 problem sharing space. „The younger generation is
16 many less focused on the entitlement of office
17 space,“ Barry Ludlow of TPG Architecture said
18 The New York Times. " They are much less territorial

Gruß

Myriam

#6

Zeile 17 told nicht said