Hilfe beim Emfehlungsschreiben

Guten Tag,

ich habe mitbekommen, dass hier englisch geschriebene Texte kontrollgelesen werden. Das finde ich klasse, weil mein Englisch nicht so richtig gut ist und ich einem Bekannten und ehemaligen Arbeitgeber ein Empfehlungsschreiben vorschreiben soll. Ich hoffe, ihr könnt mir helfen.
Vielen Dank, Mike

To whom it may concern:

I am writing this letter to recommend [NAME] for admission to your Bachelor‘s Programme „[PROGRAMME]".

I have known [NAME] for three month as a junior employee of „[COMPANY]“ –an expert company for technically advanced control solutions for conveyor facilities – in my capacity of the managing director. During this period he worked in our production and repair sector and supported me and my work many a time which gave me the chance to gain insight into his abilities and traits.

He is a keen young man and has always behaved responsibly and acted cautiously. As for his personal qualities, [NAME] is a very interested, intelligent person with an entrepreneurial personality. Furthermore he has always been very open and respectful to his colleagues and demonstrated a great capacity for integration into university life.

For all these reasons, I highly recommend this candidate to you. Moreover, I believe that your program will provide him with valuable experience, helping him to improve his English level, and deepen his understanding of foreign cultures and values.

Should you need further information, please feel free to contact me at the address above.

Hi!

To whom it may concern:

I am writing this letter to recommend [NAME] for admission to your Bachelor‘s Programme „PROGRAMME]".

I have known [NAME] for three monthS as a junior employee at COMPANY]“ –an expert company for technically advanced control solutions for conveyor facilities – in my capacity as the managing director. During this period he worked in our production and repair sector and often supported my work and myself which gave me the chance to gain insight into his abilities and traits.

He is a keen young man and has always behaved responsibly and acted circumspectly . As for his personal qualities, [NAME] is a very interested, intelligent person with an entrepreneurial personality. Furthermore he has always been very open and respectful towards his colleagues and demonstrated a great capacity for integration into university life.

For all these reasons, I highly recommend this candidate to you. Moreover, I believe that your program will provide him with valuable experience, helping him to improve his English , and deepen his understanding of foreign cultures and values.

Should you need further information, please do not hesitate to contact me at the above address.
Kind regards
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Good luck!