Hilfe, bitte um Korrekturlesen =)

Hallo @ all,

ich brauche noch einmal eure hilfe =)
ich habe es nicht so mit der Englischen Sprache, ich bin eher ein Matheass ^^ …

ich hoffe ihr könntet meine Hausaufgabe einmal überfliegen :wink:
versuche eifrig zu üben =) , um es irgendwann genauso gut zu können wie ihr =)

Im vorraus …Danke Danke Danke =)

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Task 1.
Picture 1.

  • The cashier was friendly and asks which bag the customer wants.
    Picture 2.
  • Cathy was haughty and self- satisfied with her answer.
    Picture 3.
  • Cathy was superior, because she was at fault.
    Picture 4.
  • Cathy was ashamed and embarrassed, because she was wrong.
  • The cashier was mischievous with her remark.

Task 2.

Cathy goes to a supermarket to buy something. By the checkout counter she laughs about the question of the cashier and answer as a smarty-pants woman. She means that it is wiser to take the paper bag as a plastic bag. At first she gives the impress that she is an environmentally aware woman, but it is not the fall. She takes the paper bag and thinks that she does well for the environment, but she does not, because all the products that she has bought were in plastic bags. Afterwards than the Cathy notice that she was wrong, she becomes silent and watches the cashier how she pack her products in the bag. She only say “Oh”, it indicates that she is shocked. She goes away without a word, embarrassed and ashamed.

Task 3.

Cathy represents herself as a smarty-pants woman and has decided for the paper bag. The cashier says with a touch of irony that she took all this ecologically damaging products in a nice biodegradable paper bag. Following the cashier says to her in a sarcasm way, that she has decomposes her self-righteousness in 15 seconds, faster than a plastic or paper bag.

Task 4.

Mike comes to the work and instead to start with the work, he sit down and resting.
His Chef noticed his behavior and say: “Mike, you should not to revise.”

Task 5.

Plastic bags:
Disadvantages: we need petroleum (scarce resource), decomposes in 400 years, ecologically harmful,

Plastic bags and paper bags needs slight factory costs. On the one hand the paper bags were environment friendly but on the over hand they go to fritz out. Whereas the plastic bags were tighter and they hold in wet conditions. Another point to mention is that we can recycle the Paper bags and they decompose in a week. While we must cut out down threes (scarce resource) and they do not hold in wet conditions. The Plastic bags disadvantages was that we need petroleum it is also a scarce resource, they decomposes in 400 years and they are ecologically harmful.

Task 6.

It can happen to each of us that we sound sarcastic, nevertheless we not always mean it vicious. Everybody is sarcastic on his art, sometimes more sometimes less.

Hallo,
also mein Englisch ist auch nicht perfet. Ich habe dir einfach ein paar Vorschläge eingefügt. :smile: …aber ich gebe keine Garantie auf Richtigkeit… :wink:

Task 2.

Cathy goes to a supermarket to buy something. AT the checkout counter she laughs about the question of the cashier and answer LIKE a smarty-pants woman. She means that it is wiser to take the paper bag INSTEAD OF A plastic bag. At first she gives the impress that she is an environmentally aware woman, but THAT’S NOT TRUE/ THAT ISN’T THE CASE. She takes the paper bag and thinks that she does well for the environment, but she does not, because all the products that she has bought were in plastic bags. Afterwards XXXXXXXXX Cathy notice that she was wrong, she becomes silent and watches the cashier WHEN she PACKS her products in the bag. She only SAYS “Oh”, it indicates that she is shocked. She goes away without a word, embarrassed and ashamed.

> ICH BIN MIR NICHT SICHER; OB DAS WIRKLICH DIE RICHTIGE ZEITFORM IST. Berichtest du über ein Geschehnis oder erzählst du es „live“?

Task 3.

Cathy represents herself as a smarty-pants woman and has decided HERSELF for the paper bag. The cashier says with a touch of irony that she took all this ecologically damaging products in a nice biodegradable paper bag. Following the cashier says to her in a sarcasm way, that she has decomposes her self-righteousness in 15 seconds, faster than a plastic or paper bag.

Task 4.

Mike comes to XXX work BUT instead to start HIS WORK, he SAT down and WAS resting.
His Chef noticed his behavior and SAYS/ SAID: “Mike, you should not to revise.”

Task 5.

Plastic bags:
Disadvantages: we need petroleum (scarce resource), decomposes in 400 years, ecologically harmful,

Plastic bags and paper bags NEED slight factory costs. On the one hand the paper bags were environment friendly but on the OTHER hand they go to fritz out. Whereas the plastic bags were tighter and they hold in wet conditions. Another point to mention is that we can recycle the Paper bags and they decompose in a week. While we must cut out down TREES (scarce resource) and they do not hold in wet conditions. The PLASTIC BAG’S disadvantages WERE that THEY need petroleum. BUT IT is also a scarce resource. THAT’S WHY they decomposes in 400 years and they are ecologically harmful.

Task 6.

It can happen to each of us that we sound sarcastic, nevertheless we DO not always mean it vicious. Everybody is sarcastic IN THIS WAY, sometimes A LITTLE BIT MORE AND SOMETIMES A LITTLE BIT LESS.

Task 1.
Picture 1.

  • The cashier was friendly and asked which bag the customer wanted.
    Picture 2.
  • Cathy was haughty and self- satisfied with her answer.
    Picture 3.
  • Cathy behaved in a superior way, because she was at fault. (?)
    Picture 4.
  • Cathy was ashamed and embarrassed, because she was wrong.
  • The cashier made a mischievous remark.

Task 2.

Cathy goes to a supermarket to buy something. She laughs at the cashier’s question at the checkout counter and answers like a smarty-pants woman. She believes it is wiser to take a paper bag instead of a plastic bag. At first she gives the impression that she is an environmentally conscious woman, but it is not the case. She takes the paper bag and thinks that she has done something positive for the environment, but she has not, because all the products she has bought are in plastic bags. Afterwards Cathy notices that she was wrong, she is remains silent and watches the cashier packing her products into the bag. She only says “Oh”, it indicates that she is shocked. She walks away without a word, embarrassed and ashamed.

Task 3.

Cathy acts like a smarty-pants woman and decides to take the paper bag. The cashier says with a touch of irony that she taken all these ecologically damaging products in a nice biodegradable paper bag. Then the cashier says to her in a sarcastic way, that she has shown her self-righteousness was non-existent in 15 seconds, faster than a plastic or paper bag.

Task 4.

Mike comes to work and instead of starting to work, he sits down and rests
His boss notices his behaviour and says: “Mike, you should not to revise.” - was meinst Du mit revise?

Task 5.

Plastic bags:
Disadvantages: we need petroleum (scarce resource), decomposable in 400 years, ecologically harmful,

Plastic bags and paper bags require low manufacturing costs. On the one hand the paper bags are environmentally friendly but on the over hand they go to “fritz” was meinst DU? out. Whereas the plastic bags are stronger and they are more water resistant. Another point to mention is that we can recycle the paper bags and they decompose within a week. On the other hand we must cut down trees (a scarce resource) and the paper bags are not very water resistant… The plastic bags` disadvantages are as follows, we need petroleum it is also a scarce resource, they decompose in 400 years and they are ecologically harmful.

Task 6.

It could happen to each of us that we sound sarcastic, nevertheless we not always mean it in a vicious or aggressive way. Everybody could be sarcastic in their own way, sometimes more or sometimes less.

Gruß
Sin

Dankeschön…
ich drucke es mir nun aus …
und schaue mir nochmal alles an =)
Viele Grüße Ina

Hallo sin,

vielen Dank für deine Hilfe =)
ich versuche daraus zu lernen …und ich hoffe ich kann es irgendwann auch so gut wie du =)

Viele Grüße Ina

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Hallo Ina,

Dankeschön…
ich drucke es mir nun aus …

davon kann dich keiner abhalten.
Aber bitte nur benutzen, um z.B, eine Makrele darin einzuwickeln.
Sin ist Muttersprachlerin, tu dir den Gefallen und vertrau ihrer Version.
LG

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Task 4.

Mike comes to work and instead of starting to work, he sits
down and rests
His boss notices his behaviour and says: “Mike, you should not
to revise.” - was meinst Du mit revise?

Der Satz soll heißen: „Mike, du sollst dich nicht überarbeiten/überfordern“

Vielleicht wäre „overtax“ oder „overwork“ besser.

…one hand the paper bags are environmentally friendly
but on the over hand they go to “fritz” was meinst DU? out.

…sie reißen oder gehen kaputt.
perhaps… they tear faster / go out of order.

Der Satz soll heißen: „Mike, du sollst dich nicht
überarbeiten/überfordern“

Mike, you should not exhaust yourself

…one hand the paper bags are environmentally friendly
but on the over hand they go to “fritz” was meinst DU? out.

on the other hand, they tear up quite easily.
…da ist noch einiges, was immer noch nicht stimmt. Melde mich ggf. gleich noch mal.

Ach, stimmt exhaust… bin nicht darauf gekommen =)
Danke

Hallo, Ina
gerade habe ich deinen Text erstmalig gelesen und muss sagen: Hier ist es mit Überfliegen nicht getan.
Das ist eine Heidenarbeit, das zu korrigieren und sin hat ja schon jedemenge Fragezeichen gemacht, die du unbedingt klären solltest. Aber da ist noch viel mehr, als was sie schon gesehen hat.
Vielleicht schaffen wir es mit vereinten Kräften. Wie lange ist denn noch Zeit?
Mathe ist aber auch schön, tröste dich…

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Hi!

Danke Olgu.

Das stimmt! Einige Teile sind mir (ohne Bilder) nicht klar.

Ich habe lediglich die gröbsten Schnitzer korrigiert.

Liebe Grüße
Sin

Hi!

It could happen to each of us that we sound sarcastic, nevertheless we do not always mean it in a vicious or an aggressive way. Everybody could be sarcastic in their own way, sometimes more or sometimes less.

Ich habe das do und das an vergessen. Klar ist mir der ganze Text trotzdem nicht!

Mike, don’t work too hard!

Paper bags tear quite easily

Gruß
Sin

Hi there,

Ich habe lediglich die gröbsten Schnitzer korrigiert.

…aber, dass du „but it is not the fall“ wegkorrigiert hast, nehme ich dir persönlich übel.
Das knüpfte nämlich so schon an mein gestriges traumatisches Erlebnis an.
Liebe Grüße

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Hi!

Nun stehe ich auf dem Schlauch-

but it is not the fall hatte ich doch mit case korrigiert?

Verwirrte Grüße
Sin

but it is not the fall hatte ich doch mit case
korrigiert?

Ja eben ! Didn’t you just LOVE „not the fall“ for „nicht der Fall“ ???
I did.

Hi again!

Na ja, sie hat sich ja Mühe gegeben und wohl nicht lediglich google translator benutzt. Da finde ich es nicht so schlimm.

Liebe Grüße
Sin

Habe ich schon erwähnt das ich Englisch nicht leiden mag :smiley:?

Ich habe mich nicht wirklich in die Aufgaben reingehängt und einfach drauflos geschrieben, was mir halt so einfiel. Mir ist bewusst, dass meine Antworten die reinste Katastrophe sind :smile:

Es ist nur eine Hausaufgabe, einige fehler müssen auftauchen, ansonsten glaubt mir die Lehrerin mir das nicht :stuck_out_tongue: (wir haben schon morgen wieder Englisch :frowning:

Bin auch gerade fleißig dabei englische Bücher zu lesen, habe die letzten Jahre viel verpasst.

Ich versuche einiges von selbst zu korregieren :smile: soweit …habt ihr mir schon viel geholfen :smile: genießt eure freie Zeit…

Viele Grüße Ina

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danke für das nette feedback und viel Glück !

Habe ich schon erwähnt das ich Englisch nicht leiden mag :smiley:?

Hi Ina!

Dann lass den Text so wie er ist!

Ich habe Mathe gehasst und kann das gut verstehen wenn jemand Englisch nicht mag :smile:

Liebe Grüße
Sin

Huhu,
also Mathe ist überhaupt nicht mein Fall (not my fall *ggg*) und ich habe mir da mit Sicherheit schon die besten Klopper geleistet :wink:

Nur „it is not my fall“ ist soooo köstlich! Sorry, das ist überhaupt nicht böse gemeint… für mich persönlich war das eine echte super mega Aufmunterung am frühen Morgen :wink:

Ich bin übrigens überzeugt davon, dass du diesen Ausdruck wohl nie wieder benutzen wirst…allein durch die Hervorhebung in diesem Artikelstrang… es hat also was Gutes :wink:

Viel Spaß noch, sowohl mit Mathe wie auch mit Englisch und viel Glück mit der Hausaufgabe :smile:

Gruß
ShannonS

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