Hallo
Ich muss zu meiner Unibewerbung (für Holland) ein Motivationsschreiben mitreichen. Da ich mit sowas leider gar keine Erfahrung habe, wäre es nett wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet und Verbessungsvorschläge nennen könntet.
Danke schonmal im Vorraus!!!
Letter of Motivation: International Tourism and Leisure Management
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hereby I would like to express my motivation for studying International Tourism and Leisure Management at NHTV.
After graduating from school in March 2008, I went to London, England as an Au Pair for nine months. This international experience helped me to strengthen my English skills, as I visited a language school and passed the IELTS – exam. Additionally it encouraged me to live and study abroad.
As it is my future goal to work in the multilateral and always expanding tourism industry I would like to start my international career as a German student in Holland.
The job as a tourism manager has fascinated me for a few years.
To put my expectancy into practice I will do an internship in the local event agency XXX GmbH.
I am also planning to gain some experience in a hotel or a travel agency to get a wider view of the whole industry.
Due to my willingness and my interest for your study program I am sure I can accept and accomplish the challenge of studying at your school.
Thank you very much for considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Danke schön nochmal 
Liebe Grüße, Kim
