Kann mir jemand mit Englisch helfen ?

Ich hab als Hausaufgabe so einen Text bekommen und ich würde gerne wissen, ob ich den so richtig gemacht habe. Es geht darum, ob ich Simple Present oder Present Progressive einsetzen muss.

Most of Blue Sky’s customers are young and successful people who work 60-hour weeks and earn very good money. These people normally haven’t much leisure time, and spend their working week in offices. They like to make up for this during their vacations, when they going on exotic adventure holidays to far-off places. There they only enjoying a complete change of scene, but they also getting some physical exercise. At the moment, business slows down because of shortage of qualified staff. Some economists think that this becoming the most serious problem in Britian. The governement now trying to attract foreign workers to Britain. They even offer free English courses and cheap acommodation to people who accept this offer. Currently, nearly 60.000 French people work in London, for example, and the number of EU citizens who move there rising fast. Normally, British people welcome these newcomers. They help the British economy, while they also add to London’s flair.

Wäre so lieb, wenn mir jemand helfen könnte.
Danke
Lara-bela15

Hi

Most of Blue Sky’s customers are young and successful people who work 60-hour weeks and earn very good money.
These people normally haven’t much leisure time, and spend their working week in offices.
They like to make up for this during their vacations, when they -go- on exotic adventure holidays to far-off places.
There they not only -enjoy- a complete change of scene, but they also -get- some physical exercise.
At the moment, business -is slowing- down because of shortage of qualified staff.
Some economists think that this -is becoming- the most serious problem in Britian.
The governement is now trying to attract foreign workers to Britain.
They are even offering free English courses and cheap acommodation to people who accept this offer. Currently, nearly 60.000 French people are working in London, for example, and the number of EU citizens who are moving there is rising fast. Normally, British people welcome these newcomers. They help the British economy, while they also add to London’s flair.

At the moment is ein Signalwort für progressive und du solltest da „to be“ nicht vergessen.

Hallo,

noch eine kleine Korrektur:

These people normally haven’t much leisure time, and spend
their working week in offices.

Richtig muss es heissen:
…don’t have much …

Have kann als Hilfs- oder Vollverb eingesetzt werden. Dadurch ergibt sich die unterschiedliche Form in der Verneinung.
Eine genaue Erklaerung findet man hier:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/ra…

Schoene Gruesse
Sabine

accommodation 2 x c

Hi,

accommodation 2 x c

You forgot:

Some economists think that this -is becoming- the most serious problem in Britian.
The governement is now trying to attract foreign workers to Britain.

Should be „Britain“ and „government“, of course. :smile:

Schöne Grüße,
MacD