Korrektur lesen

Hey Leute, ich mache für Englisch ein Lesetagebuch, könnt ihr bitte einmal Korrekturlesen?
lg :smile:

The following text is a summary of the 82nd chapter of the novel “Twelve” by Nick McDonell.
In the 82nd chapter White Mike takes a walk on New Year’s Eve trough New York and thinks about flying and his favourite birds, the parrots. First White Mike gets in a cab and when he got out again he goes into a bookstore. As he comes out of the bookstore, Timmy and Mark Rothko stop him and want to buy drugs. Mike suggests that they can get the drugs later but Timmy and Mark want the drugs at this moment so they follow him. Mike gets annoyed and tells both they’ll get a special deal when they leave him alone. Both agree, but a few seconds later they follow Mike to his house and he doesn’t notice it because he’s drinking a milk-shake. When Mike noticed that they followed him, he is angry and tells Timmy and Mark that they won’t get any weed from him again, but then he thinks about how it would be when Mark and Timmy tell the other kids where he lives and how it would be when all the kids are waiting in front of his house to buy drugs, Mike allows Mark and Timmy to get in his house. After they got their weed, they’re talking about parrots and which name would be a good name for that parrot which Mike wants to buy. Mike likes the name “Snoop” but then Timmy and Mark started to sing and Mike was pissed and tells them to go. When they were gone Mike was thinking about adults and at this moment he gets a message on his telephone but he doesn’t answer.

In the 82nd chapter White Mike takes a walk on New Year’s Eve through New York and thinks about flying and his favourite birds, the parrots. First White Mike gets into a cab and when he gets out again he goes into a book store. When he comes out of the book store, Timmy and Mark Rothko stop him and want to buy drugs from him.

Mike suggests that they can get the drugs later but Timmy and Mark want the drugs now, hence they follow him. Mike gets annoyed and tells both of them they’ll get a special deal If they just leave him alone. Both agree, but a few seconds later they follow Mike to his house and he doesn’t notice it because he is drinking a milk-shake.

When Mike notices that they are following him, he is angry and tells Timmy and Mark that they won’t get any weed from him again, but then he thinks about how it would be IF Mark and Timmy tell the other kids where he lives and what it would be like in future, when all the kids wait in front of his house to buy drugs, Mike allows Mark and Timmy to come into his house. After they get their weed, they talk about parrots and which name would be a good name for that parrot which Mike wants to buy. 

Mike likes the name “Snoop” but then Timmy and Mark start to sing and Mike is drunk and tells them to go. When they are gone Mike thinks about adults and at this moment he gets a message on his cell phone but he doesn’t answer. 

LG

vielen dank :smile:

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