Lebenslauf/CV ,Korrektur, Verbesserungsvorschläge

hallo liebe leute,
ich habe gerade meinen lebenslauf geschrieben,
Ist jemand bereit den zu korrigieren, vielen dank im voraus und danke auch an alle die meinen motivationletter/letter of motivation korrigiert haben.
lg
Europass
Curriculum Vitae

Personal information

First name(s) / Surname(s)
Address(es) , Vienna, Austria
Telephone(s) :
E-mail
Nationality Austrian
Date of birth
Gender Female

Work experience

Dates 01/08-
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue, teacher for German as a foreign language,
Main activities and responsibilities teaching migrants German as a foreign language, migrants rights
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector immigration and integration, adult education

Dates 11/05-2008
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue, teacher for German as a foreign language, interpreter, translator
Main activities and responsibilities teaching migrants German as a foreign language, migrants rights,translation
(German-Bosnian)
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector Free lancer : - immigration and integration, adult education, translation,

  • administrative and financial tasks such as networking, management,

Dates 09/05-12/07
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue
Main activities and responsibilities Teaching Bosnian/Croatian/Serbian, regional and cultural studies of the Former Yugoslavia
Name and address of employer Ministry of the Interior, Vienna
Type of business or sector Interculturality, adult education

Dates 09/05-12/07
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue
Main activities and responsibilities Teaching Bosnian/Croatian/Serbian, regional and cultural studies of the Former Yugoslavia
Name and address of employer Federal Ministry for National Defence,Vienna
Type of business or sector Interculturality, adult education

Dates 11/05-12/07
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue, teacher for German as a foreign language,
Main activities and responsibilities Teaching German
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector Interculturality, immigration and integration, adult education

Dates 09/00-12/02
Occupation or position held Business employee
Main activities and responsibilities build relations and networks, planning and organizing,administrative transaction, cost accounting, assist in the accounting
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector builder

Education and training

Dates 2000-2006
Title of qualification awarded Master of Arts,
Thesis title: “Migrants in Austria and intercultural competence”
Principal subjects/occupational
skills covered Translation and interpretation
Intercultural competence
The roles and systems of governance including gorenments and international organizations,
researching
negotiations, presentations and client-handling
Name and type of organisation
providing education and training Translation science and Political science,University of Vienna

Dates 1994-1999
Title of qualification awarded
Principal subjects/occupational
skills covered Management,sales, conflict management , negotiation and consultancy
Name and type of organisation
providing education and training the Commercial Academy, Vienna

Personal skills and competences

Mother tongue(s) Bosnian/Croatian/Serbian
Other language(s)
Self-assessment Understanding Speaking Writing
European level (*) Listening Reading Spoken interaction Spoken production
English B2 Independent user C1 Proficient user B2 Independent user B2 Independent user C1 Proficient user
German C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient user
French A2 Basic user A2 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic user
Russian A2 Basic user A2 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic user
Turkish A1 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic user
Arabian A1 Basic user
(*) Common European Framework of Reference for Languages

Social skills and competences Team work: I have worked in various types of teams, from diplomats to refugees
Mediating skills: gained throug my position as a coach on the Federal Minstry
Intercultural skills:gainded during my studies and my work in this field
Non-verbale communication- University of Viena
“Diversity management”, seminar at bfi Vienna, Moore Vienna
“Gendermainstreaming”, seminar at bfi Vienna
Technical skills and competences Competent with most Microsoft Office programmes
selling technique obtained on the course” Power selling I” and “power selling II”,Rossmanith, Vienna

Hallo, Selmica!
Für englische Texte bin ich leider nicht zuständig. Ich wünsche aber alles Gute!
Holle

Lebenslauf in Deutsch wäre kein Problem… Sorry!

Sigrid Hofmaier

Hallo,

deinen lebenslauf kann ich dir auf deutsch korrigieren - auf englisch leider nicht. Trotzdem viel erfolg!

Hallo selmica, hier die Fehler, die mir aufgefallen sind:
dein Text beginnt mal mit kleinen, mal mit großen Anfangsbuchstaben, das würde ich vereinheitlichen, nach dem letzten Wort kein Satzzeichen (z.B. ist hinter management in „Dates 11/05-2008“ ein Komma)
freelancer schreibt sich in einem Wort, nach diesem Wort und vor immigration befindet sich ein Doppelpunkt und ein Spiegelstrich (löschen, bei
„Education and training“

governments statt gorenments

bei „Social skills and competences“

through statt throug
Ministry statt Minstry
gained statt gainded

Non-verbal statt Non-verbale

Viele Grüße und viel Glück
wünscht
Meisenring

hallo;

leider ist mein english nicht gut genug.

liebe grüsse

karin

Hallo,

leider kann ich Ihnen nicht weiterhelfen.

MfG
Gato

Work experience

Dates 01/08-
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue,
teacher for German as a foreign language,
Main activities and responsibilities teaching migrants German
as a foreign language, migrants rights
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector immigration and integration, adult
education

Dates 11/05-2008
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue,
teacher for German as a foreign language, interpreter,
translator
Main activities and responsibilities teaching migrants German
as a foreign language, migrants rights,translation
(German-Bosnian)
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector Free lancer : - immigration and
integration, adult education, translation,

  • administrative and financial tasks such
    as networking, management,

Dates 09/05-12/07
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue
Main activities and responsibilities Teaching
Bosnian/Croatian/Serbian, regional and cultural studies of the
Former Yugoslavia
Name and address of employer Ministry of the Interior, Vienna
Type of business or sector Interculturality, adult education

Dates 09/05-12/07
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue
Main activities and responsibilities Teaching
Bosnian/Croatian/Serbian, regional and cultural studies of the
Former Yugoslavia
Name and address of employer Federal Ministry for National
Defence,Vienna
Type of business or sector Interculturality, adult education

Dates 11/05-12/07
Occupation or position held Coach for intercultural dialogue,
teacher for German as a foreign language,
Main activities and responsibilities Teaching German
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector Interculturality, immigration and
integration, adult education

Dates 09/00-12/02
Occupation or position held Business employee
Main activities and responsibilities build relations and
networks, planning and organizing,administrative transaction,
cost accounting, assist in the accounting
Name and address of employer x, Vienna
Type of business or sector builder

Education and training

Dates 2000-2006
Title of qualification awarded Master of Arts,
Thesis title: “Migrants in Austria and intercultural
competence”
Principal subjects/occupational
skills covered Translation and interpretation
Intercultural competence
The roles and systems of governance including gorenments and
international organizations,
researching
negotiations, presentations and client-handling
Name and type of organisation
providing education and training Translation science and
Political science,University of Vienna

Dates 1994-1999
Title of qualification awarded
Principal subjects/occupational
skills covered Management,sales, conflict management ,
negotiation and consultancy
Name and type of organisation
providing education and training the Commercial Academy,
Vienna

Personal skills and competences

Mother tongue(s) Bosnian/Croatian/Serbian
Other language(s)
Self-assessment Understanding Speaking Writing
European level (*) Listening Reading Spoken
interaction Spoken production
English B2 Independent user C1 Proficient user B2 Independent
user B2 Independent user C1 Proficient user
German C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient
user C2 Proficient user C2 Proficient user
French A2 Basic user A2 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic
user A1 Basic user
Russian A2 Basic user A2 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic
user A1 Basic user
Turkish A1 Basic user A1 Basic user A1 Basic user
Arabian A1 Basic user
(*) Common European Framework of Reference for Languages

Social skills and competences Team work: I have worked in
various types of teams, from diplomats to refugees
Mediating skills: gained throug my position as a coach on the
Federal Minstry
Intercultural skills:gainded during my studies and my work in
this field
Non-verbale communication- University of Viena
“Diversity management”, seminar at bfi Vienna, Moore Vienna
“Gendermainstreaming”, seminar at bfi Vienna
Technical skills and competences Competent with most Microsoft
Office programmes
selling technique obtained on the course” Power selling I” and
“power selling II”,Rossmanith, Vienna

Hallo!

Ich hatte deine Anfrage unbeantwortet gelassen. Mich hatte irritiert, was das für ein Anhang mit A1 und so weiter ist, wo eine Beschreibung fehlt, des Weiteren gibt es viele Wiederholungen, die so im Lebenslauf nicht optimal sind und die nicht handgeschrieben aussehen. Aber sicher wirst du wissen, warum du ihn so geschrieben hast. Ich wünsche dir trotzdem viel Erfolg!

Katja,
Fee für alle Fälle