Letter of recommendation

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Könnte bitte jemand so lieb sein und meinen Letter of recommendation kritisch unter die Lupe nehmen? Vielen lieben Dank!!!

Letter of Recommendation

To whom it may concern:

In my position as the head of the programme „xxx“ at the University of Applied Sciences xxx, I got to know Ms. wonderful when she just started to enrich the programme with her encouragement in September 2009.

“xxx” is the umbrella term of a joint promotional program of universities in the federal state of Brandenburg. The overall goal is to enhance the number of high-school graduates to start an academic study. Therefore we need the help of students, because no accredited person could get through to pupils as much as they do. Before the student gets representative at conferences, rallies, trade shows or as a guest lecturer at schools, they all achieve special skills through workshops and training courses.

Wonderful demonstrated with a lot of motivation and curiosity that she is an excellent candidate for this job. She inspired with her enthusiasm, her ardour to be a student and with her intuition a lot of pupils to go to college. In addition Ms Wonderful displayed a salutary eagerness to learn, readiness of mind and puts this easily into action. Beyond that she is capable of developing ideas independently as well as taking up the ideas of other team members and refining them

Based upon Wonderful’s efficiency and her strength of purpose, I know that she is a reliable, intelligent and a very hard working student. Furthermore you should keep clearly in mind that she is an open minded and outgoing person with a honest personality.

I would like to recommend Wonderful for a position with your organisation. I am convinced that she will be an asset to any organisation and I recommend her for any endeavor she chooses to pursue.

If you have any further questions regarding WOnderful, please feel free to contact me at the address or phone number below.

Sincerely,

Vielen lieben Dank,
Katja

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Ich habe hier haupsaechlich Grammatik korrigiert, die Formulierungen sind nicht immer ideal, es gibt genug templates ueber google.

To whom it may concern:

In my position as the head of the programme „xxx“ at the
University of Applied Sciences xxx, I got to know Ms.
wonderful when she just started to enrich the programme with
her encouragement in September 2009.

As Head of the xxx programme (nicht sicher, ob das Wort in diesem Zusammenhang benutzt werden kann, da xxx nicht erklaert ist) I have known Ms Wonderful since September 2009 when she took on the role as xxxx.

“xxx” is the umbrella term of a joint promotional program of

Fuer wen ist dieser Brief, GB oder USA? Es ist entweder program oder programme aber nicht beides.

universities in the federal state of Brandenburg. The overall
goal is to enhance the number of high-school graduates to
start an academic study. Therefore we need the help of
students, because no accredited person could get through to
pupils as much as they do. Before the student gets
representative at conferences, rallies, trade shows or as a
guest lecturer at schools, they all achieve special skills
through workshops and training courses.

goal is to increase the number … to enrol in academic studies. We need the help of students to achieve this. Before students become representatives … or guest lecturers … they have to undergo extensive training.

Wonderful demonstrated with a lot of motivation and curiosity
that she is an excellent candidate for this job. She inspired

Ms Wonderful … motivation and energy (curiosity klingt seltsam) …

with her enthusiasm, her ardour to be a student and with her

… her passion being a student …

intuition a lot of pupils to go to college. In addition Ms
Wonderful displayed a salutary eagerness to learn, readiness
of mind and puts this easily into action. Beyond that she is
capable of developing ideas independently as well as taking up
the ideas of other team members and refining them

… exeptional eagerness to learn …
Was ist mit readiness of mind gemeint?

… into action. She is proactive and a great team player.

Based upon Wonderful’s efficiency and her strength of purpose,
I know that she is a reliable, intelligent and a very hard
working student. Furthermore you should keep clearly in mind
that she is an open minded and outgoing person with a honest
personality.

Ms Wonderful’s … She is an open-minded, outgoing and honest individual.

I would like to recommend Wonderful for a position with your
organisation. I am convinced that she will be an asset to any
organisation and I recommend her for any endeavor she chooses
to pursue.

I highly recommend Ms Wonderful (schon wieder, es ist unhoeflich sie hier nur mit dem Nachnamen zu betiteln) for employment. She would make a great asset to any organsation.

If you have any further questions regarding WOnderful, please
feel free to contact me at the address or phone number below.

Sincerely,

Should you have any further questions please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully

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Vielen Dank für die schnelle Korrektur!
Ich habe nicht Ms. Wonderful nur mit ihrem Nachname angesprochen, das war nur allgemein das Synonym für den Namen, den ich manchmal im ganzen, manchmal nur den Vornamen aber auch mit Ms und Nachnamen. Mit „readiness of mind“ meine ich dir schnelle Auffassungsgabe (hab ich mir aus einem anderen letter agbekuckt.

Nochmal vielen lieben Dank!