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ich will mich in den niederlanden an einer uni bewerben. dafür brauche ich u.a. mindestens ein empfehlungsschreiben in british english. eines bekomme ich von meinem tutor und eines von dem lehrer der volkshochschule. das von dem volkshochschullehrer muss ich ihm allerdings noch vorschreiben. ich bin nicht so versiert in englisch und habe gehofft, dass du mir helfen kannst, indem du mir sagst, was falsch ist und was sich anders besser anhören würde.

erstmal das schreiben auf deutsch und dann, wie ich es auf englisch ausdrücken würde.

*Sehr geerhte Frau surname,
Ich kann Ihnen Ihnen forename surname für den Studiengang „Economics and Business“ ohne Einschränkungen empfehlen.
Ich habe Herr surname vor etwa zwei Monaten bei meinem Volkshochschulkurs zum Thema „Buchführung für Kleinunternehmer“ kennen gelernt. Er war der mit Abstand jüngste Teilnehmer mit der geringsten Erfahrung auf diesem Gebiet und konnte dem hohen Arbeitstempo und -anspruch der fortgeschrittenen Kleingruppe dennoch gerecht werden. Während des intensiven Kleingruppenkurses habe ich ihn als einen sehr strebsamen und visionären jungen Mann erlebt, der die besprochene Thematik verstanden und mit seinen intelligenten Fragen vertieft hat.
Bei Herr Gregor habe ich das Gefühl, dass er genau weiß, was er erreichen will und ein ausgesprochen geeigneter Kandidat für ihr Studienprogramm ist. Ich empfehle ihn ausdrücklich und wünsche ihm viel Erfolg bei der Umsetzung seiner Vorhaben. Sollten Sie Fragen haben, zögern Sie bitte nicht, mich zu kontaktieren.

To whom it may concern,

I can recommend forename surname for admission to your bachelor degree course “Economics and Business” without restrictions.
I was first introduced to forename surname early in March at one of my courses at the adult education centre in Berlin on the subject of “Accounting for small business owners”. He was the youngest participant with the slightest experiences in this field by far but nevertheless he was able to meet the requirements of the high speed and extent of work of the advanced course. During the labour-intensive small group course I got to know him as a very ambitious and visionary young man who got the discussed topics and deepened them with his intelligent questions.
I sense that forename surname really knows what he wants to achieve and that he is an highly suited and strong candidate for your bachelor degree course. I explicitly recommend him and wish him success with the execution of his plans. If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

bitte helft mir weiter! ich muss die komplette bewerbung spätestens mittwoch abschicken

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Dear Madam OR Dear Mrs. Sowieso,

I can recommend forename surname for admission to your
bachelor degree course “Economics and Business” without
reservation. OR: I can unreservedly recommend…
I first met forename surname early in March at
one of my courses at the Adult Education Centre in Berlin on
the subject of “Accounting for Small Business Owners”. He was
by far the youngest participant with the least experience in
this field but nevertheless was able to meet the
requirements of the
advanced course, in terms of speed and workload. During the labour-intensive small group
course I got to know him as a very ambitious and visionary
young man who understood the discussed topics „***and deepened them***“ SAGT KEINER AUF ENGLISCH!! with
his intelligent questions.
I sense that forename surname really knows what he wants to
achieve and that he is a highly suited and strong candidate
for your bachelor degree course. I explicitly recommend him
and wish him success in the furtherance of his plans. If you
need any further information, please do not hesitate to
contact me.

bitte helft mir weiter! ich muss die komplette bewerbung
spätestens mittwoch abschicken

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Hallo,

etwas freier:

Dear Mrs XY,

I can recommend forename surname for admission to your
bachelor degree course “Economics and Business” without
restrictions.

I am very pleased to recommend Tiemo Knauletsch for admission to your bachelor degree course „Economics and Business“.
I am a lecturer in an adult education programm (Volkshochschule Didaburg) and got to know Mr Knauletsch as a participant in my course „Accounting for small business owners“.
He was by far the youngest participant in the course with the least experience in this field; nevertheless he was more than able to keep up with the demands of this intensive course and the pace set by the small group.
I have come to know him as a very ambitious young men with a vision. He not only understood the subject matter but was able to probe the topics with his enquiring mind.
I am of the opionion that Mr Kauletsch knows precisely what he wants to achieve and that he would be an excellent candidate for your study program.
I recommend him wholeheartedly and without any reservations. I am sure that he would contribute greatly to your program and I wish him well with all his future endeavours.

Yours sincerely,

Elke

Vorausgesetzt natürlich, dass die Leute, die das über dich schreiben, das auch wirklich so sagen wollen.

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Fehler entdeckt:

I have come to know him as a very ambitious young men

young m a n

with a
vision. He not only understood the subject matter but was able
to probe the topics with his enquiring mind.
I am of the opionion that Mr Kauletsch knows precisely what he
wants to achieve and that he would be an excellent candidate
for your study program.
I recommend him wholeheartedly and without any reservations.
I am sure that he would contribute greatly to your program and
wish him well with all his future endeavours.

(das letzte I weglassen)

Elke

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Ah, I see you spotted the deliberate mistake hahaha lol!