Hallo,
ich muss ein Motivationsschreiben für ein Praktikum in einer Reiseagentur in Indonesien schreiben.
Da ich sowas vorher noch nie gemacht habe, wäre es super wenn das jmd. mal korrektur lesen könnte, vor allem in hinblick auf die English Fehler.
es handelt sich hierbei nur um eine grobe Fassung des ganzen, wichtig ist auch dass zu erkennen ist warum ich das Praktikum gerade in Bali machen will, was ich mir von dem Praktikum erhoffe und wie ich mir meine berufliche Zukunft vorstelle.
There we go:
Dengan hormat/ Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in application for an internship placement at your company.
The last 4 years I was studying South- East Asian Studies at University Hamburg. My main fields have been Indonesian Language and Culture. From September 2010 to May 2011 I take place in the BIPA Programm of Udayana Universitas to improve my Indonesian language skills and learning more about the Balinese Culture.
Travelling has always been my main hobby and during my nine month stay in Bali, my wish to work international in future, was getting more stronger. Since the Tourism Sector give me the opportunity to fulfill this dream, I aim to study Tourism and Hotelmanagment in my near Future.
To put my expectancy into practice I’m seeking now for intership in the tourism sector and also my goal is to enhance my careerprofile in the travel /hotel industry through an internship in Indonesia.
Since it always have been one of my dreams to work in Indonesia one day, it would be an outstanding opportunity for me to work in your company, in an international environment and also get experience in cultural diversities between Indonesia and Germany.
Since the main Business and income in Bali is tourism, it’s a good place for me to get this experience.
Completing an internship would give me an excellent insight the into the daily process of a big travel agency and an insight into your company.
I’m also planning to gain experience in a hotel to aquire a more comprehensive view of the whole industry. If there is a possibility I would be really glad when I could completing a part of the intership in your hotel as well.
I am aware that a working experience in a foreign country involves considerable effort, but I am a person who readily adapts to new situations. My desire to enrich my global experience will overcome any obstacles I encounter.
Additionaly I have good skills in Indonesian Language, and if there is a need I could operate as link between german customers and your company.
Since I already lived for nine month in Bali, I’m already used to the environment, and I also have good skills in Indonesian language. I have a driving license for Car and Motorbike, and I was driving motorbike daily during my time in Bali and Im already confident with Bali Traffic and directions.