Hallo!
Ich muss für ein Bewerbung um ein Praktikum einen Motivation letter verfassen. Ich hatte diesen bereits meiner Freundin in Aberdeen geschickt. Sie hat ihn etwas umgeschrieben. Aber ich bin immer noch nicht ganz zufrieden damit.
Könnte ihn bitte jemand durchlesen und sein Feedback dazu geben? Das wäre wirklich toll!
Vielen Dank im Voraus und schöne Grüße
Having researched the internships offered by Twin UK Group, I would appreciate it if you would consider my application for the Leonardo da Vinci Internship II Programme in Media, Public Relations or Travel and Tourism. I am dedicated to furthering my knowledge of language and believe I could play an integral part in one of your teams.
I am currently fully employed in Germany as an Executive Assistant for Lebenshilfe Mannheim e.V., concerned with the welfare of those suffering from Mental Illness. Through this role I have gained valuable experience in events management, project management and co-ordinating challenging process interfaces. I have proved the ability to work autonomously while ensuring efficiency, professionalism and attention to deadlines. I have represented the company to the best of my ability at meetings and congresses with the customers and members of the organisation always in mind.
I have not however, lost my enthusiasm for working with vernacular, verbal communication, style and expression and have strived to gain further knowledge on different aspects of the discipline of language. Since achieving an MA in English and Italian Literature in 2008, I have been working towards a qualification on translating/interpreting with the Open University. On completion of the course in 2012 I will be a ‘state approved/certified translator’.
Working for SAP Germany AG and the University of Heidelberg, I gained experience in working in a linguistic studies office environment. I learned the importance of communication and the reciprocal relationship of working in a team. I enjoyed working in a multi-cultural environment and have benefited from the knowledge brought by others from so many different backgrounds.
I believe my International experience, background in a multi-cultural environment, ability to master challenges and my sheer enthusiasm and hard work ethic would make me a qualified candidate for your organisation. Please contact me should you require any further information. I look forward to hearing from you soon.