Sätze so richtig (Englisch) dringend

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#1

ich habe eine präsentation gemacht mit den sätzen die ich unten aufführe. kann mir bitte jemand sagen ob sie so richtig sind? grammatikalisch? das wäre super nett… danke an alle:

ich habe eine powerpointpräsentation gemacht mit folgenden seiten:
(Danke an alle die sich das anschauen!!!)

seite 1
Definition
The „Celtic Tiger“ is a termused to describe the incrediable growth of
the Irish economy during the 90s until 2007
„Just yesterday it seems Ireland was on of Europe`s poorest countries.
Today it is about as prosperous as the European average and gets richer
all the time.“
(The Economist,May 17, 1997)

seite 2:
„Das Armenhaus Europas“
— Ireland used to be one of the
poorest countries of the EU.
— Due to the poor employment
prospects many Irish went
abroad forwork.

„The Celtic Tiger“
-Ireland had the highest
income per head after
Luxembourg.
— Companies such as Dell,
Microsoft and Intel were
settled in Ireland
— The real estate market has a
boom

Seite 3:
II The financial crisis
— Reasons for the economical crash
— In 2008 the prizes for properties fall rapidly
More than 1/3 of all houses were built in last 20 years.

  • In the 80s the median house prize for semi-detached house was about
    200,000E
  • In 2007 one had to pay for the same house about a million euro.
    The house prizes have fallen formore than 1/3 compared to the prizes in
    2007
  • 20% of all properties are inhabitated
  • „Ghost Towns“

Seite 4
The real estate situation wreaked havoc on the Irish
Banks.

  • During „the Boom“ many banks accomadated high
    credits easily.
  • The state took over the bad credits.
  • That will cost about 90 millions.
  • Ireland has the highest dical deficit (Haushaltsdefizit)
    of the EU
  • Number of enumployment: 13%

Seite 5
Possible questions
— How has the Irish society changed under the
impression of the Irish financial crises?
— Can it also be seen as a chance to return to the „old“
Irish values such as soldiarity and happiness „with
less“?
— What would you like to ask?

#2

Hi!

Da hast Du Dir aber große Mühe gegeben.
Ich habe ein paar Sachen korrigiert, aber klasse und weiter so!

Page 1
Definition
The „Celtic Tiger“ is a term used to describe the incredible growth of the Irish economy from the 90s until 2007.
“Just yesterday it seemed Ireland was one of Europe’s poorest countries.
Today it is about as prosperous as the European average country and gets richer all the time.“
(The Economist,May 17, 1997)

Page 2
“Poorhouse Europe”
— Ireland used to be one of the poorest countries in the EU.
— Because of the high unemployment rate many Irish emigrated to find work

„The Celtic Tiger“ -Ireland had the highest income per head after Luxembourg.
— Companies such as Dell,Microsoft and Intel came to Ireland and created new jobs.
— The real estate market boomed

Page 3
II The financial crisis
— Reasons for the economical crash
— In 2008 the prices for properties fell rapidly
More than a third of all houses were built during the last 20 years.

  • In the 80s the average house price for a semi-detached house was about
    200,000 Euro.
  • In 2007 one would have had to pay about a million Euro for the same house
    The house prices have fallen by more than a third, compared to the prices in
    2007
    20% of residential property remains empty .
    -”Ghost Towns”

Page 4
The real estate situation wreaked havoc on the Irish banks.

  • During „the Boom“ it was very easy to obtain high loans from the Irish banks.
  • The state took over the bad credits.
  • That will cost about 90 million. (€ ?)
  • Ireland has the highest  fiscal deficit within the EU
  • Unemployment figure: 13%

Page 5
Possible questions
— How has the Irish society changed due to the effects caused by the Irish financial crisis?
— Could it also be seen as a chance to return to the “old“ Irish values such as solidarity and happiness “with
less“?
— Do you have any further questions?

Liebe Grüße
Sin

#3

sehr großen dank!!!

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#4

My pleasure/ gerne