Hallo Forumbesucher!
Wer kann mir sagen in wie weit meine Sätze grammatikalisch stimmen?
Vielen Dank im Voraus.
Hier sind sie :
Now, we see the development of the Stockprices in the last six months.
Which have bottom out of 54 € after July.
However it has recovered and reach a peak more than 64 € in October.
The currenly share pice amounted about 63,77 €.
Ok, let´s look at the next topic.
I like to focus on Europe BASF and Asia key data employees.
With reference to employees the Europe BASF has increased about 0,6 % compared between 2003 and 2004.
Whereas Asia, Pazific Area and Africa has slightly decreased about 0,9 % compare 2003.
To sum up we can say that the whole personnel costs reduced to 5. 819 Million € ´s.
OK, that´s all I wanted to say about that.
If there are no questions, I´ll move on to “Key data – workforce”
The womens part have increased around 0,2 in comparison to 2003 and 2004
-This is also in the Management and professionals with even 0,9 %
- And above all in the field of Senior Executives was a growth of 0,2 % to comparison previous year.
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Hi!
Ich habe einiges korrigiert, verstehe aber teilweise überhaupt nicht was du meinst.
Now we can see the development of the stock prices during the last six months.
They have bottomed out to 54 € after July.
However they have recovered and reached a peak of more than 64 € in October.
The current share price amounts to about 63.77 €.
Ok, let’s look at the next topic. (das klingt ziemlich leger)
Vorschlag: Now let us move on to the next topic.
I would like to focus on Europe BASF and Asia key data employees.
With reference to the employees Europe BASF has increased (its workforce) ? by about 0.6 % compared to the time between 2003 and 2004.
Whereas Asia, Pacific Area and Africa have slightly decreased (their workforce) ? by about 0.9 % compared to 2003.
To sum it up, we can say that the total personnel costs were reduced to 5, 819 million €.
OK, that’s all I wanted to say about that. (das klingt auch ziemlich leger)
Vorschlag: That was my opinion about the employee key data
If there are no questions, I’ll move on to “Key data – workforce”
The women’s part (?) has increased by around 0.2 in comparison to 2003 and 2004 the number of women in management and professional fields has even increased by 0.9 %
Above all in the field of Senior Executives there was a growth of 0,2 % in comparison to the previous year.( Wachstum wovon?)
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Gruß
Siân