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Hallo,
ich bin 16 Jahre alt und in der 10. Klasse Realschule, da ich nicht besonders gut in Englisch bin benötige ich dringend Hilfe und das wäre super nett wenn ihr euch meinen Text einmal durchlesen würdet und Verbesserungsvorschläge oder Fehler mir meldet.
Meine Aufgabe ist es eine Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.
Die Zusammenfassung…
The Fight for the Amazon:
1989 Sting and his wife Trudie Styler founded the Rainforest Foundation.
They want the peoples of the Amazon to help in the fight against the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation is committed to both human rights and the environment. But now the participation of native peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is recognized as one of the most effective environment management tools. The charity works with local organizations in order to help the people that they can keep their traditional territories. They ensure the legal ownership of their land and the allocation of certain forest areas as well as improving their livelihoods.
Der original Text:
The Fight for the Amazon: The Rainforest Foundation was founded in 1989 by Sting and his wife Trudie Styler to help the indigenous peoples of the Amazon rainforest in their fight to protect their homelands (and the rest of the planet) from the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation is committed to both human rights and the environment. Early attempts at environmental conservation often excluded local populations and sometimes resulted in their forced expulsion from traditional lands. But now, the participation of indigenous peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is recognized as one of the most effective environmental management tools. The charity works in partnership with local organizations to assist them in demarcating their traditional territories, securing legal ownership of their land, establishing community forests and improving their livelihoods.
Und schon mal im Voraus vielen, vielen Dank.
LG. Jenny