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#1

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Hallo,
ich bin 16 Jahre alt und in der 10. Klasse Realschule, da ich nicht besonders gut in Englisch bin benötige ich dringend Hilfe und das wäre super nett wenn ihr euch meinen Text einmal durchlesen würdet und Verbesserungsvorschläge oder Fehler mir meldet.

Meine Aufgabe ist es eine Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.

Die Zusammenfassung…

The Fight for the Amazon:
1989 Sting and his wife Trudie Styler founded the Rainforest Foundation.
They want the peoples of the Amazon to help in the fight against the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation is committed to both human rights and the environment. But now the participation of native peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is recognized as one of the most effective environment management tools. The charity works with local organizations in order to help the people that they can keep their traditional territories. They ensure the legal ownership of their land and the allocation of certain forest areas as well as improving their livelihoods.

Der original Text:

The Fight for the Amazon: The Rainforest Foundation was founded in 1989 by Sting and his wife Trudie Styler to help the indigenous peoples of the Amazon rainforest in their fight to protect their homelands (and the rest of the planet) from the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation is committed to both human rights and the environment. Early attempts at environmental conservation often excluded local populations and sometimes resulted in their forced expulsion from traditional lands. But now, the participation of indigenous peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is recognized as one of the most effective environmental management tools. The charity works in partnership with local organizations to assist them in demarcating their traditional territories, securing legal ownership of their land, establishing community forests and improving their livelihoods.

Und schon mal im Voraus vielen, vielen Dank.

LG. Jenny

#2

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Hallo,
ich bin 16 Jahre alt und in der 10. Klasse Realschule, da ich
nicht besonders gut in Englisch bin benötige ich dringend
Hilfe und das wäre super nett wenn ihr euch meinen Text einmal
durchlesen würdet und Verbesserungsvorschläge oder Fehler mir
meldet.

Meine Aufgabe ist es eine Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.

Die Zusammenfassung…

The Fight for the Amazon:
1989 Sting and his wife Trudie Styler founded the Rainforest
Foundation.
They wanted to help the peoples of the Amazon in their fight
against the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest
Foundation is committed to both human rights and the
environment. The participation of native peoples and
their knowledge of local ecology is recognized as one of the
most effective environment management tools. The charity works together
with local organizations in order to help people to keep their traditional territories. They ensure the legal
ownership of their land and the allocation of certain forest
areas and help to improve their livelihoods.

Der original Text:

The Fight for the Amazon: The Rainforest Foundation was
founded in 1989 by Sting and his wife Trudie Styler to help
the indigenous peoples of the Amazon rainforest in their fight
to protect their homelands (and the rest of the planet) from
the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation
is committed to both human rights and the environment. Early
attempts at environmental conservation often excluded local
populations and sometimes resulted in their forced expulsion
from traditional lands. But now, the participation of
indigenous peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is
recognized as one of the most effective environmental
management tools. The charity works in partnership with local
organizations to assist them in demarcating their traditional
territories, securing legal ownership of their land,
establishing community forests and improving their
livelihoods.

Und schon mal im Voraus vielen, vielen Dank.

LG. Jenny

#3

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Hallo,
ich bin 16 Jahre alt und in der 10. Klasse Realschule, da ich
nicht besonders gut in Englisch bin benötige ich dringend
Hilfe und das wäre super nett wenn ihr euch meinen Text einmal
durchlesen würdet und Verbesserungsvorschläge oder Fehler mir
meldet.

Meine Aufgabe ist es eine Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.

Die Zusammenfassung…

The Fight for the Amazon:
In 1989 Sting and his wife Trudie Styler founded the Rainforest Foundation.
They want to help the people of the Amazon region in their fight against the destruction of their natural habitat, the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation is committed to both human rights and the environment. The participation of native people and

their knowledge of the local ecology is recognized as one of the most effective environmental management tools. The charity works with local organizations in order to help the people that they are able to keep their traditional territories. This would ensure them legal ownership of their land by allocation of certain forest areas as well as helping to improve their livelihoods.

Der original Text:

The Fight for the Amazon: The Rainforest Foundation was
founded in 1989 by Sting and his wife Trudie Styler to help
the indigenous peoples of the Amazon rainforest in their fight
to protect their homelands (and the rest of the planet) from
the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation
is committed to both human rights and the environment. Early
attempts at environmental conservation often excluded local
populations and sometimes resulted in their forced expulsion
from traditional lands. But now, the participation of
indigenous peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is
recognized as one of the most effective environmental
management tools. The charity works in partnership with local
organizations to assist them in demarcating their traditional
territories, securing legal ownership of their land,
establishing community forests and improving their
livelihoods.

Und schon mal im Voraus vielen, vielen Dank.

LG. Jenny

#4

Hallo, Heike, ich war sehr mit Aufträgen beschäftigt. Im Prinzip bin ich der Meinung, dass es nicht richtig ist, dir hier eine bessere Note zu besorgen, sondern wesentlich besser, ein wenig mehr zu büffeln. Gelegentlich kann ich dir schon mit spezifischen Fragen helfen, hier ist es aber etwas zu kompliziert, Korrekturen zu machen. Du solltest aber sagen, wo du glaubst, Fehler gemacht zu haben. Schicke solche Dinge an meine eigene Email, damit ich sie in Word korregieren kann. Für die vorliegende Arbeit ist es natürlich . zu spät.
Doris Ganser
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Text bitte Korrekturlesen

Hallo,
ich bin 16 Jahre alt und in der 10. Klasse Realschule, da ich
nicht besonders gut in Englisch bin benötige ich dringend
Hilfe und das wäre super nett wenn ihr euch meinen Text einmal
durchlesen würdet und Verbesserungsvorschläge oder Fehler mir
meldet.

Meine Aufgabe ist es eine Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.

Die Zusammenfassung…

The Fight for the Amazon:
In 1989 Sting and his wife Trudie Styler founded the Rainforest
Foundation.
They want the peoples of the Amazon to help in the fight
against the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest
Foundation is committed to both human rights and the
environment. But now the participation of native peoples and
their knowledge of local ecology is recognized as one of the
most effective environment management tools. The charity works
with local organizations in order to help the people that they
can keep their traditional territories. They ensure the legal
ownership of their land and the allocation of certain forest
areas as well as improving their livelihoods.

Der original Text:

The Fight for the Amazon: The Rainforest Foundation was
founded in 1989 by Sting and his wife Trudie Styler to help
the indigenous peoples of the Amazon rainforest in their fight
to protect their homelands (and the rest of the planet) from
the destruction of the rainforest. The Rainforest Foundation
is committed to both human rights and the environment. Early
attempts at environmental conservation often excluded local
populations and sometimes resulted in their forced expulsion
from traditional lands. But now, the participation of
indigenous peoples and their knowledge of local ecology is
recognized as one of the most effective environmental
management tools. The charity works in partnership with local
organizations to assist them in demarcating their traditional
territories, securing legal ownership of their land,
establishing community forests and improving their
livelihoods.

Und schon mal im Voraus vielen, vielen Dank.

LG. Jenny