On a typical day, I normally get up at 8’ clock and breakfast. After breakfast I brush my teeth. I’m going to school at 9’clock and 9:30 am in the school. After school I go home and eat. Then I go to the sport with friends. At 8 o’clock in the evening I at home. Then I watch tv and eat . At 11 pm o’clock go to bed. This is my typical day
Findet ihr irgendwelche fehler?
Hallo!
Ich finde hier tausende Fehler und gehe davon aus, dass du erst seit einer kurzen Zeit Englisch lernst. Lass dir nicht vom Internet erklären, wo die Fehler sind, sondern suche dir einen Lehrer, der es dir erklärt.
Liebe Grüße
in fast allen sätzen sind mind. 1 -2 fehler! ups! hat das ein schlechtes übersetzungsprogramm übersetzt? ich rate DRINGEND zu nachhilfe.
Ja, einige. Aber man versteht gut, was gemeint ist.
Viele Gruesse
von
Griselda.
Also ich würde es so schreiben:
On a typical day, I get up at 8’ clock and have breakfast.
After breakfast I brush my teeth. I go to school at
9’clock and get there by 9:30 am. After school I go home for lunch.
In the afternoon, I play sports/work out (wenn Du ins Studio gehst o.ä./ (vielleicht etwas genauer, was Du spielst) with my friends. At 8 o’clock I go home for dinner. In the evening, I usually watch TV. At 11 pm I
go to bed. This is my typical day
Vorsicht mit den Zeiten. Wenn du Tätigkeiten beschreibst, die häufig/jeden Tag passieren, dann musst du simple present verwenden. Und die Verben nicht vergessen.
Ich hoffe,ich konnte Dir weiter helfen.
Ich würde ein paar Dinge anders schreiben. - Hoffe, du kannst damit etwas anfangen. LG Ingrid
On a typical day I usually get up at 8 o’clock and have my breakfast.
After breakfast I brush my teeth. I go to school at
9 o’clock and 9:30 am at school. After school I go home and
have my lunch. Then I make sport activities with friends. At 8 o’clock in the
evening I am back at home. Then I watch TV and have my dinner . At 11 pm
go to bed. This is my typical dayFindet ihr irgendwelche fehler?
Schon ganz gut, nur ein paar kleine Korrekturen.
On a typical day, I normally get up at 8 o’clock and have breakfast.
After breakfast I brush my teeth. I’m going to school at 9 o’clock and arrive at school around 9:30 a.m. After school I go home and have lunch. Then I do sport with friends. At 8 o’clock in the
evening, I come back home. Then I watch TV and have dinner. At 11 o’clock I go to bed. This is my typical day.
On a typical day, I normally get up at 8’ clock and have breakfast.
After breakfast I brush my teeth. I go to school at
9’clock and 9:30 I am at school. After school I go home and
have lunch.Then I go to have Sport with friends. At 8 o’clock in the
evening I am at home. Then I watch tv and have supper. . At 11 o’clock pm I
go to bed. This is my typical dayFindet ihr irgendwelche fehler?
Hoffe ich konnte etw helfen.
Karl Dornieden
Hallo Aceman, hier sind einige Vorschläge:
On a typical day, I normally get up at 8 o’clock and have breakfast. After breakfast I brush my teeth. I go to school at 9 o’clock and at 9:30 I am in school. After school I go home and eat. Then I go to sport with friends. At 8 o’clock in the evening I am at home (oder I go home). Then I watch tv and eat (vielleicht something). At 11 p.m. I go to bed. This is my typical day.
Gruesse,
Holzbein
kann nicht helfen
Hallo Aceman2011,
wenn es nur darum geht, dass dein Text verständlich sein soll, ist er OK. Aber wenn er möglichst fehlerfrei sein soll, musst du schon einige Korrekturen machen.
Mein Vorschlag:
On a typical day I normally get up at 8 o’clock and have breakfast. After breakfast I brush my teeth. At 9 o’clock I leave for school and at 09.30 I arrive at school. After school I go home and eat. Then I am doing sports with my friends. At 8 o’clock in the evening I return home. Then I watch TV and eat something. At 11 o’clock I go to bed. This is my typical day.
LG
Pia
Hier meine Vorschläge:
… and have breakfast
… I go to school at … and arrive at …
… and have lunch.
Then I do some sports with friends.
… in the evening I am back home.
… watch TV and have supper.
This is a typical day of my life.
Hallo Aceman,
kurz gelistet:
Wenn Du am oder pm verwendest, brauchst Du kein „o’clock“.
LG
Guesswho
Hast du schon Antworten bekommen oder brauchst du noch eine?
Sorry, habe die Frage wohl übersehen, Gruß ynot