Hallo könnt Ihr bitte den folgenden Bewerbungsbogen auf englisch korrigieren. Ich bewerbe mich für ein Flüchtlingslager im Libanon.
Natürlich ist die Seitenansicht bei mir besser 
Personal Information
Family Name (Surname): Nieker
First Name: Gustaf
Father’s Name: San
Mother’s Name: Kilan
Birthdate: September 9th, 1991
Nationality: German
Address, Tel no. and email: Rote Allee 9, 21614 Buxtehude Germany
04181/5654664, [email protected]
Background Information:
Educational Degree(s):
General Certificate of Secondary Education 2009
Advanced Technical College Certificate 2012
Institution:_
Hauptschule Nord in Buxtehude (Secondary School)
Fachoberschule Gesundheit und Soziales ; Sozialpädagogik in Stade
(Technical College Health and Social Affairs; social pedagogy)
Work Experience:
April 1st, 2011
- July 15th, 2011 Practical Training /Internship in „Rudolf-Steiner-Schule“; Steiner-Waldorf education this
is a private school with anthroposophical orientation and kindergarden
February 1st, 2011
- March 31st, 2011 Internship in „Christliches Jugenddorfwerk“; it is an institution in which
I worked with young people, who were emotionally disturbed
August 1st, 2010
- January 31st,2011 Internship in „Wohnhaus der Lebenshilfe“; I worked with disabled adults
and older people in a social residential home
Previous Volunteer Experience:
Since April 2010 Pedagogical Assistent for disabled children and teenagers in the „Lebenshilfe“
Skills:
-Social skills: I like to work with other people and help them. I like to work in the team.
- I exert myself for more justice.
Work in Amnesty International
-First Aid I attend a course in my school
- Language skills mother Language is Arabic and German, English basics
Volunteer Interests:
Activities which you would like to involved in:
x Vocational Training
x Dental Clinics
x Educational Programs: Pre-school, English Language, computer training.
x Activities: Music, Sports, Drama, Drawing, Handicraft, photography.
x Psychological counseling, Art, Drama Therapy.
x List Other Interests:
x Organize parties
References:
Internet pages of my work experiences are:
Internship „Rudolf-Steiner-Schule“: http://www.waldorfschule-harburg.de/
Internship „Christliches Jugenddorfwerk“: http://www.cjd-jugenddorf-bremervoerde.de/jd-bremerv…
Interchip „Wohnhaus der Lebenshilfe“:
http://www.lebenshilfe-buxtehude.de/index.php?option…
Website for the previous volunteer experience are:
http://www.lebenshilfe-buxtehude.de/index.php?option…
My school website are: http://www.jobelmannschule.de/
If you need my reports, references I can send them per mail
Signatures Date
Könnt ich mir auf englisch sagen was für interessen ich noch angeben sollte um guten eindruck zu hinterlassen.
Ich habe auch Pflegeerfahrung soll ich das noch damit explizit einbringen ?